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  • Fantasy Heroes and Their Magical Powers: PART IV

    E.G. Kardos

    handsome black male , man sorceress casting a fireball spell, fantasy

    Maybe you’re like me, but I’ve always wanted magical powers. I’m just glad that there are great stories out their for folks like us to read or view.

    This is Part IV of my seires about fantasy heroes and their magical powers.

    I listed my eight favorite ways writers introduce the magical powers of their fantasy heroes. Most of these eight if not all, to my way of thinking, are ways we uncover our own superpowers as we navagate our lives. When you think about it we do some pretty extraordinary things when we are pressed and many time, not unlike our favorite fantasy hero.

    The hero and their magical powers

    In Parts I-III I go into more depth about uncovering magical powers, but here’s the list. Please take a look at Ways Our Fantasy Heroes Find Their Magical Powers: Part I. But here’s the quick Look:

    Some are born with it. 

    Characters might find their powers from someplace within them.

    Heroes that we love are sometimes the children of a divine or cosmic power or god. 

    How about the characters who have access to information, and they learn magic? 

    Then come the characters who find someone else with magic, and they cut a deal to access this power for themselves. 

    Magic can be found in our natural world if we only know where to look. 

    What about the wands, swords, and other artifacts that somehow possess the powers that our hero wants or needs? 

    The hero uncovers powers from within, but it has nothing to do with birthright, but all to do about their own will. 

    Yes, fantasy heroes may have magical powers but…

    …how they uncover them and, then, how they use them tells us a EVERYTHING about who they are. This is the moment we either relate to them or we don’t. Their story is usually a very human story much like our own.

    And what do fantasy readers/viewers like the most?

    In Part III I shared some thoughts on the most popular ways readers and viewers like their fantasy heroes to uncover their powers. This is more opinion than scientific as I could not find sources, but it’s interesting.

    • through some cool magical artifacts,
    • inherited abilities from their magical ancestors,
    • or from divine or supernatural forces that grant them magical or superpowers.

    My personal favorite is when the hero has to earn or learn about their powers. What’s your favorite way? Let me know in the commnets below.

    When and How the Hero find their Magic Powers

    Like anything worthwhile, sometimes our hero goes through a process before they can truly use their powers. In the trilogy, The Elias Chronicles, I devoted four chapters on how Elias uncovereed his powers. I shared the first three of those chapters in each post and the fourth appears at the end of this article. ENJOY!

    But first…

    Elias learns from a mentor, is tasked with many steps and finally uncovers and learns about his magical powers. Most importantly, he learns the gravity of his pwers and when to use them AND not.

    Below is chapter 7 from The Rings: Journey Beneath Sirok. This is Book III in The Elias Chronicles. The hero, Elias, uncovers his powers in chapters 5, 6, 7 and 8 with the help of his mentor, Tas (perhaps pictured above).

    The chapters are:

    8

    Dancing Souls

    The sun was still low and new in the sky when Elias woke up. He could see Tas as he stood high upon a rock in the middle of the lake. Elias swam to where Tas was standing.

    “Tas, tell me who you are—and don’t tell me ‘in due time.’ Oh, sorry….”

    Tas let out a loud and long laugh that filled the air around them. “You are quite persistent—that is good. If you must know…my father was black, and my mother was white. My grandmother was Japanese, and her mother was Dutch. My grandfather was from Brazil, and my grandmother was Jewish. My father was Catholic, and my mother was Buddhist. My great-grandmother was Lutheran, and her father was Muslim. My other grandfather was Hindu. I have lived on every continent. Ah, I think that covers everything…oh, I tried to be a vegetarian, but it didn’t last. Does that do it for you?”

    Surprised by the answer, Elias said, “Ah, yep, that does it.”

    “Good. Elias, let’s talk more about you. You have asked me about this place many times. I told you that it doesn’t exist.”

    “Yes, that’s right. Funny thing is, I believe you.”

    “You asked me how I communicate with the Turul, and I said?”

    “In due time,” Elias said.

    “That is correct,” Tas laughed. “You asked how I flung that stone with great speed, and I said?”

    “In due time, Elias.”       

    “Yes, and you asked me how I got the fish to jump into my hands, and I said?”

    “In due time.”

    “And the Donum…”

    “IN DUE TIME,” Elias said.

    “Well, Elias, your time has come.”

    “I hope you don’t mind me saying, but it’s about time,” Elias said with laughter.

    Tas laughed, too, as he began to climb higher on the rocks until he reached a landing. He motioned for Elias to join him. Elias climbed up, and they sat cross-legged and faced each other.

    “I wish to share with you a power of the Endless Within called Cigam.”

    “Cigam? I have never heard of that before,” Elias said.

    “Of course not, Elias, as it comes from here, and as we both know, this place does not exist. I am not sure how strong this power is outside of this place, but it may help you on the next leg of your journey.”

    “So it might not work outside of here—this place that doesn’t exist?” Elias asked.

    “Yes, that is what I said, but I think you are in luck as the place you are going is not of your world. It is not of this time. It may be the past, or it might be the future, but it isn’t the present,” Tas said.

    “What? Okay, okay. I should expect all this by now. What do I have to do?”

    “First, you must listen to me. Are you with me?” Tas asked.

    “Yes, go ahead.”

     “I told you of the Earth and how she manages to keep things in balance.”

    “Yeah…I understand,” Elias said.

    “That is, until she is faced with The Two Powers – good and evil, which are manifested in man and only man.”

    “Right.”            

    “This good and evil comes out in man because of his playing around with The Truths. Because he wants more than his fair share. We look to those with the Donum—the gift—to help.”

    “Supposedly, I have this, this—Donum?”

    “Yes, you are correct. You have the Donum. You must use it,” Tas said.

    “Alright…so what does this have to do with Cigam?”

    “EVERYTHING. Last night you saw the brilliant and colorful lights radiating from all the stone pillars just like the one we are sitting atop.”

    “They were amazing. Like nothing I’ve seen before…like my palette full of colors but a million times brighter.”

    “Elias, these lights are a rainbow of light, an aurora known as the Dancing Souls. They are here with us as we speak. We may not always see them, but they are ALWAYS present. We see them, especially in the darkest hours. They are always here.”

    “We’re sitting on Dancing Souls?” Elias asked.

    With a roar of laughter, Tas answered, “As a matter of fact, we are Elias…as a matter of fact, we are.” 

    Elias straightened up and leaned forward. His eyes widened as he asked, “How do I use this power—this Cigam?”

    “You must believe…you must focus…you must have faith…you must have hope…and you must have love. Without these, you have nothing. You have no power to do anything. This is why a person with compassion will provide the balance. Remember, Cigam only works for good. The Dancing Souls are forever looking—always searching for balance.”

    “So, how do I use it? I don’t get it.”         

    “It is simple, Elias. When you need Cigam, think about all we talked about. Focus it in your mind. Acknowledge it in your heart, feel it—and then act on it. Stand up.”

    They stood together, and Tas handed Elias a stone. “See our camp over there?”

    Elias squinted his eyes, “Barely, but yes, I see it.”

    “Send that stone that direction and have it land on our campfire.”

    “What?”

    “You heard me,” Tas said with a raised, stern voice. 

    Elias looked at Tas and then at the target. He raised his hand with an open palm. Tas gently placed the stone in his hand. Elias cocked his arm and threw the stone, but it went no further than thirty yards and landed in the lake below with a plop.

    Tas said nothing but scratched his head and then looked at Elias.

    “Okay. There is a little more that goes into this, and let me think what that could be.” Tas raised a few fingers to his chin and thought for a moment. He scratched his forehead and shifted his body weight to his left hip. He filled his cheeks with air as if he was about to play a trumpet.

    “Ah, yes. Of course—you must do this as a positive force and not a negative force.”

    Puzzled, Elias said, “Tas, I’m throwing a stone. I’m not thinking of whether it is positive or negative.”

    “That’s it…but you must—you must! You are not throwing anything, my boy. You are sending, you are transporting, you are moving something…and you are doing so to create the change that is needed. You must visualize what it is you wish to accomplish and then do it. It may appear you are ‘throwing’ a stone, but, indeed, you are not. You are the stone,” Tas said with a fluster.

    “I still don’t follow. There’s got to be more than that.” 

    Tas rubbed the palms of his hands together as he thought. He brought them to his chin. He looked to the side and then up to the sky. “Trust, believe, love, and then focus all your good into what you are doing—no anger, no frustration, no anxiety—just the good. Bring the light of the Dancing Souls into yours. Look for the Dancing Souls in all you do. If you remember this, you will always see the light. You will see what it is you need to see. Choose another stone.” 

    Elias picked up a stone and examined it. He looked at Tas. Tas smiled, nodded his head, and whispered, “Trust, believe, and love.” Elias focused on the site, cocked his arm, and followed through. The stone zipped off his fingers before he knew what was happening. It soared with an energy that Elias had never before felt. The stone whizzed five feet beyond his target and buried itself deep into the sand. Elias and Tas turned to each other. Tas grabbed Elias, picked him up, and spun him around. They both fell to the ground as they laughed and celebrated his accomplishment.

    Out of breath and with a rich and deep tone in his voice that Elias had not yet heard, Tas said, “Very good, Elias, very good. You must work on your focus. That is something we must all work on.”

    Elias sat up and thought for a moment and then asked, “But Tas, could a man of compassion use this power to endanger others?”

    Tas remained on the ground as he looked to the sky and answered, “Ah. That is a very good question. My answer is yes—you use this power only as a last resort. The power is only effective against what is evil. If you use this to be boastful, you will not get the results you want. Cigam will help you in the Under World. What happens there is later imitated in your world. Your work is that important.” 

    His mind was flooded with many thoughts, and Elias only halfway listened to his answer.

    ________________

    That evening was a mirror image of the night before. All was calm, and the moonlight was bright and clear. Elias sat on the ground alone on top of a stone pillar. He wrapped his arms around his knees and folded up to his chest. The colors of the Dancing Souls emerged in grand style as the light began to swallow the darkness. The colorful glow shone on his skin and illuminated all around him. He looked at the many colors that blended and moved with the grace of a ballerina. He felt a jumble of emotions. He felt confident from all he had learned. He knew he was now part of the Dancing Souls. He was, however, scared at all that was before him. Who will I meet along the way? What am I supposed to do? He thought. He had many questions but no answers. He was confounded as to why he was the one with the Donum. All was quiet. Like magic, Elias turned his head and saw Tas sitting close by.

    “I didn’t hear you come,” Elias said.

    “Oh, I’ve been here for some time.”

    The two sat in silence as they gazed into the brilliant rainbow of lights. After a few moments, Tas stood, walked to where Elias sat, and joined him. Tas sat directly in front of Elias. 

    “Look at me. Trust me, Elias. Hold the amulet between your thumb and index finger and look at me.” Tas leaned forward and looked directly into his eyes. Tas’ face tightened up, and his pupils became very large. Elias could only see the reflection of the Dancing Souls in his eyes. Elias opened wide. “Elias, you must leave at dawn. You will start your journey atop of Sirok.”

    “Sirok?”

    “Yes, Sirok, but this time you will not leave Sirok. You will go into its belly.”

    “What? Its belly. What do you mean?” Elias asked.

    “To go deep inside, you will find another land. This land is of another realm. It needs you.”

    “Why, what’s there?”

    “Do not interrupt me…I’m on a roll. I do not know how long I will be able to interpret all that is entering my consciousness. Be still and hold your tongue. Okay, where was I? You will go into the ruins, and you will find a passageway that will lead you to an opening.”

    “An opening…ah, sorry, I’ll stay quiet.”

    “Yes, a tiny hole, a crack, a crevice of some kind. It is an opening, nonetheless. I see it as small as the eye of a needle. You will pass through the eye.”

    “What? A hole the size of a needle?” 

    “Elias, you must think in new ways. Remember what you have experienced here. You will meet many beings along the way. At some time, you will meet a beautiful woman. You will also come face to face with evils. Some you will recognize, some you will not. You will see the Kingdom of Gold high on a rocky hill. Rain? This is interesting…you will make it rain. Ah, yes. This is very interesting; I cannot tell if you will do this metaphorically or literally to make it rain. Hmmm… sorry, but I see no more. I have nothing else to tell you.”

    “What? Just like that? Tas, you are not giving me much to go on…how will rain solve anything?

    “Perhaps it is what the rain brings,” Tas explained.

    “Like little flowers?” Elias said in frustration.

    Tas burst into laughter and said, “Questions are good, but please…Elias, you will figure it out.”

    “This is like a jigsaw puzzle, and, Tas, I hate puzzles. Tell me more.”

    “I cannot. I can tell you that you are entering another time and one that no longer exists in the physical world. Cigam will work.”

    “I don’t even know what to do with Cigam. Is this other world like this world?”

    “No, Elias. It is not like this one—but it could be.”

    They both sat in silence. Elias peered off to the horizon and squirmed. He stood and walked to the edge of the pillar and then sat facing the only darkened area in the distance. “I don’t know about all this. I could stay here with you.”

    “I need no more company. The Dancing Souls are plenty. You have the Donum. You have the gift. I will tell you that Zoltan is in danger. You must deliver him and all good people from their peril.”

    “How will I defend myself? I wouldn’t be here today without a sword I used to protect myself. I wish I had that sword.”          

    “Understand this, Elias. You have Cigam—the Dancing Souls—the Endless Within! How many times must I tell you? You need not worry about what you don’t have but rejoice in what you do have. Don’t forget you have the wisdom and power of the Dancing Souls. You became aware of it here, but you have always had it—the Donum. I became aware of that the moment I saw you.”

    Elias turned to Tas and said, “What do you mean?”

    “The amulet. The amulet around your neck. You may not see it, but I do. It has all the glow and radiance that is all around us. I’m sure Nattymama had something to do with that,” Tas let out a thunderous laugh.

    “I bet it was that rainbow she was conjuring up.”

    “Oh, I don’t doubt it,” Tas said with a tone just above a whisper. “I must visit her again someday….”

    As he shook his head and slumped back, Elias said, “Tas, I don’t know about all this. This amulet seems to get me into a lot of trouble. Maybe I should leave it with you.”    

    “Elias, when will you learn—I thought you might say something like that. It is yours. Some things you just can’t and should not give away. It is you. That’s all I can say.”

    “I know, I know. I was starting to really like this place.”

    Tas boomed with laughter and said, “Why yes, Elias, this is a very wonderful place to get used to. Of course, one day you will be back as all who are good return, but you are special—you are called to something else.”

    Embarrassed, Elias nodded with a faint smile and said, “So, I leave at dawn?”

    “Not so fast. I must give you something else.”

    Tas reached into his pocket and pulled out a ring covered with flecks of colorful gems. In the very center was the image of the Turul.

    “Take this ring and give it to Zoltan. It is his ring that possesses power beyond reason. Oh, and yes…” Tas pulled out the remnants of the scraggly green beard that Elias had around his ankle when he first arrived.

    “Why do I need this?”

    “You must travel past the Vodnasters when you leave. If you tie this around your wrists, they will leave you alone. You were so smart to save a good size clump,” Tas said with a grin. “I must leave you now.”

    Tas stood and began to walk away. He paused, turned to Elias, and said, “It is so simple—compassion balances the world. Use the Endless Within. But, Elias, you will know when it is time to leave that world, and if you do not, you may never return to your world.”

    If you enjoyed this post, you may like these: Hero’s Journey Monomyth;Why Fantasy is a Good Read; YA Fantasy Trilogy: Saving the World One Book at a Time; Fantasy Fiction and Real Life are the Same; Storytelling Within a Story, What Mentors Do Best.

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  • How Fantasy Heroes Find Their Magical Powers: PART III

    E.G. Kardos

    What’s your favorite way for fantasy heroes to find their magical powers? 

    In my previous posts (Parts I and II), I shared eight ways fantasy heroes find their magical or superhero powers. Thinking more about it, I wonderded of those eight, what do readers/viewers of fantasy feel are the most popular ways heroes find their powers?

    how fantasy heroes obtain their magic or super powers

    Since I don’t really know how anyone could honestly be sure about this answer, I decided to check it out on the internet…so ’ve read on that the most popular way that readers/viewers like their heroes to find their powers in the following way:

    • through some cool magical artifacts,
    • inherited abilities from their magical ancestors,
    • or from divine or supernatural forces that grant them magical or superpowers.

    …and the internet MUST be right…

    Well, that’s for another post. But if these three ways for heroes to obtain their powers are the most popular, then readers/viewers tend to prefer characters who are given their powers.

    I can see that, we all like gifts.

    In other words, it’s desirable for many readers/viewers of fantasy for the hero to be in the right place at the right time and gains incredible powers without much effort. It’s like winning the lottery. Great gig if you can get it.

    But what about this?

    I enjoy these heroes and their journeys as well, but I truly love stories where the hero has to act or work hard to earn their powers. Because if they have the drive to work toward something, their journey will be more compelling, and they’ll become a truly heroic figure in a different, more inspiring way.

    Maybe it’s just me.

    Consider it: if you’re lucky enough to win the lottery, sure, you might do something cool with the money. But say if you don’t win the lottery like 99.99% of everyone, and if you work hard at something you love and good fortune comes your way, you’ll more likely act differently—more thoughtfully, perhaps. Well, maybe.

    Heroes like this are underdogs and you gotta love the underdog.

    In my way of thinking, this describes most of us, or the 99.99% that don’t win the lottery. It makes me feel a connection to hero as maybe–just maybe–that could be me.

    How do you like the hero to find their magical powers?

    Think about your favorite heroes. How did they gind their magical powers? Let me know in the comments section below.

    In my last two posts, The Ways Our Fantasy Heroes Find Their Powers: Part I and Our Fantasy Heroes Find Their Powers: PART II, I listed the eight ways that I felt were popular ways for the fantasy hero to obtain their magical powers. Take a look.

    As promised, here is the third chapter of The Rings: Journey Beneath Sirok…

    …where Elias is one step closer to discovering his magical powers. This is the second of three books in the fantasy series, THE ELIAS CHRONICLES.

    ENJOY, and stay tuned—the fourth chapter is coming soon.

    Below is chapter 6 from The Rings: Journey Beneath Sirok. This is Book III in The Elias Chronicles. The hero, Elias, uncovers his powers in chapters 5, 6, 7 and 8 with the help of his mentor, Tas.

    Each of these chapters Elias learns more about his powers as his mentor, guides him to uncovering his powers and magic within and how they are part of a greater source. Like I said last time, pretty cool, huh?

    The chapters are:

    … the next chapter is coming soon.

    7

    The Truths

    The next day, Elias awoke to Tas standing knee-deep in the lake. He clapped his hands a number of times in a particular rhythm, and a fish jumped up where he could catch it. He did this two more times and walked to shore, where he started a fire. 

    “Let us start the day with brain food, Elias.”

    “How—how did you do that?”

     “Do what?

    “Catch fish like that.”

    “I merely opened my hands, and when the fish was near, I caught it. That was the easy part.”

    “No, no, no. I mean, how did you get the fish to willingly leap up out of the water?”

    “In due time, Elias. Let’s eat.”

    Tas began to clean the fish with a knife and then skewer them. Finally, he laid them on a red-hot stone surrounded by blazing embers. Elias looked on with interest.

    “Elias, the fish will be sacrificed for our nourishment. Appreciation and gratitude for all living creatures is important, and we must never forget to respect all life.”

    Tas flipped the fish and sat cross-legged while Elias sat on his knees. They both faced the lake. A cool breeze filtered in and out of the trees and sent small waves onto the shore. A few minutes later, they ate.

    Tas looked intently at the fire, and with the rhythm of a poem, he spoke.

    “Wood feeds fire,

    Fire created Earth,

    Earth bears metal,

    Metal enriches water,

    Water nourishes wood,

    and then again, wood feeds fire and so on.

    Tas stood and walked to the lake and stood in the water. Elias sat and thought about the words he had just heard. He then joined Tas.

     “I get it. Everything is connected. Everything needs everything else,” Elias said.

     “This rock is the home of every inhabitant from the ant to the antelope. The snail to the sperm whale. Every tree is sacred, and every life enriches another from what we think is the smallest to what we believe is the biggest.” Tas cupped his hands into the water and splashed his face. He took a drink of the fresh, clean water. Tas continued and said, “Come with open hands and drink your fill.”

    Elias jogged to where Tas stood, cupped his hands, and drank. He felt the coolness of the liquid as it streamed down his chin and dripped down his neck. He used the back of his hand to wipe his mouth.

    Tas looked at Elias and said, “Ah, water—it becomes you, my boy.”

    Elias smiled at his friendly remark. Tas nodded his head and began to walk to the edge of the water. He waved his hand, and Elias followed. “Let us sit, Elias.” The two sat on the wet beach and stared out over the water and the stone pillars that stood tall. A breeze rushed in and gave Elias a chill.

    “There is a balance to everything, but when the balance is disturbed, we have chaos and destruction. Sometimes this chaos and destruction are easily seen, and other times it is hidden in the hearts and souls of man.”

     Without warning, Tas sprung up and swiftly walked into the lake, dove in, and swam to the stone pillar that was closest. He pulled himself up and sat gazing off to the horizon. Elias followed.

    “I call this balance The Truths. Alone, the world balances itself. With man, the world falls victim to human desire. What a man wants, a man tries to get.” 

    “Our history books at school are filled with battles and one country overthrowing this country or that—of wars. I think you’re right. Man sees something he wants and goes for it right or wrong,” Elias said as he picked up a stone and tossed it over the cliff.

    “That is troubling if that, indeed, is what man is,” Tas said as he shook his head.

    “I agree—it doesn’t sound good,” Elias said.

    “Only a man with compassion knows the importance of The Truths, and his compassion shows the way.”

    “Compassion? What do you mean?”

    “All humans SHOULD have concern for the suffering of others.”

     “I don’t know…I think you need more than that,” said Elias.

    “Yes, but compassion is where it starts. You can also call it your conscience. Without it, rules mean nothing. This is where the imbalance begins.”

     “Hmmm. I think I see what you mean,” Elias looked at Tas, and Tas looked back at him. “I don’t think this way of thinking crosses their minds,” said Elias.

    “Even when it crosses a mind or two, man sometimes doesn’t try to understand a person’s struggles and disappointments. Man, many times, does not care. Oh, it is too often that man loses sight of what’s in him—how he can make a difference. This is when a man does nothing,” Tas turned and looked into Elias’ eyes.

    “I would never do that.” 

    “I believe you, Elias, but sometimes we are tempted as we are not perfect. Sometimes it is easy to do nothing, to give up. When more and more souls are tempted, give up, or give in, The Truths go out of whack. The two great powers must be in balance—easy as that.”

     “We are all part of the bigger world,” said Elias. 

     “I would say—the bigger cosmos and the larger dream…but you know, it is rather ironic that even as weak as man is, he still has the ability and responsibility to balance the two great powers. This is just how it is.”

    Tas looked at Elias until Elias began to squirm.

    “Why are you looking at me that way?” Elias asked.

    “Elias, you have the Donum.”

    “The what?”

    “The Donum is the gift. It’s been given to you—this gift.”

    “What gift? And what does this have to do with me and my journey? How does this save Zoltan?”

    Tas stood and brushed off his pant legs. He walked a little way from where they sat. He placed his hand over his eyes to shield the sun’s rays.

    “Well, aren’t you going to tell me about this gift I supposedly have?” 

     “In due time, my boy. In due time.” Tas turned to him. “It has a great deal to do with you, but let me first tell you more about The Truths.”

    Elias grew more and more impatient but kept his feelings to himself as Tas continued.      

    “First, Earth. It is stubborn and patient. It has been here for millions of years, taking considerable abuse, but it is steady. It brings life and brings metals, minerals, and beauty. The Earth has volatile powers. It has explosive energy, but in the end, it balances itself. The Earth is special. We only have one, and from it comes all life. This is why we call her Mother.”

    “Ah, Mother Earth,” Elias said with a smile.

    “Trees bring us wood. Wood may be very sturdy but also may be very flexible. Trees give us what we need to breathe. Trees and the wood from the trees give us shelter and fuel. I could go on and on. Trees are generous.”

    “So it is sacred.”

     “Yes, Elias, trees are sacred. As far as metal, it is also sacred as it enriches our lives—in our water and food, as well as provides tools for our homes. It is also precious and highly prized. It turns into tools or weapons. The Truths must always stay in balance.” 

    “I bet my paintings have something to do with this imbalance, I’m sure.”

     “You have finally brought up your paintings. I was waiting for that as I have heard of your paintings. Yes, I think you are right—your paintings have much to do with this imbalance.”

    “Did you hear this from the Turul too?” Elias asked.

     “Of course, Elias, who else?” Tas roared with laughter. Elias couldn’t help but laugh too.

     “What about water?” Elias asked

     “Ah, water. It is so very precious. We must all have it. It must be clean. It must be abundant. It nourishes trees. It nourishes everything, including our souls. As it is vital to life, it may be very destructive, and its force should always be respected.”

     “Tas, I know about fire. I learned this from…”

      “…Gaspar! My dear friend. How is he?”

      “You know Gaspar?”

     “Absolutely. EVERYONE knows Gaspar. He is the goldsmith of goldsmiths. He is peculiar but a very good man. What did you learn from him?” Tas asked. 

    “How hot and how long. When something is precious, he said, one must know how close and how long to expose it to what could destroy it. He said you don’t think it—you feel it. Fire changes things—for good and for bad.”

    “I couldn’t have said it as eloquently as that. Elias. I am telling you something so simple—no secret about it, but to balance The Truths, we must be kind and compassionate souls. Just as catching the fish is the easy part, what gets the fish in the air is different altogether. Tomorrow. More tomorrow.”

    Look for the next chapter when Elias learns about “The Dancing Souls”.

    If you enjoyed this post, you may like these: Hero’s Journey Monomyth;Why Fantasy is a Good Read; YA Fantasy Trilogy: Saving the World One Book at a Time; Fantasy Fiction and Real Life are the Same; Storytelling Within a Story, What Mentors Do Best.

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  • Ways Fantasy Heroes Find Their Magical Powers: PART II

    E.G. Kardos

    Ways fantasy Heroes Find Their Powers

    Have you ever wondered how fantasy heroes find their powers? In my last post, The Ways Our Fantasy Heroes Find Their Powers, I shared some ways how the hero finds their powers. Not all fantasy heroes are cut from the same cloth, AND that means their powers come to them in very unique ways.

    Eight Ways a Fantasy Hero Find their Powers

    In my last post, I shared my favorite ways a fantasy hero uncovers their powers. Here they are again:

    Some are born with it. That’s the easiest way. Although I love these characters, I feel like I did when I was hanging around with the “cool” kids growing up. Why them? I would ask. I think there are many other ways our hero can become “the chosen one”…

    Characters might find their powers from someplace within them. Some event or situation in their lives triggers an emotion, and they begin to use their powers without even knowing it. They realize they have it—they have powers. This is a favorite of mine as I always think that maybe some event in my life with spark my unique power.

    Heroes that we love are sometimes the children of a divine or cosmic power or god. These heroes are great, and I love them as well. Unfortunately for me, I won’t be getting any suprpowers this way.

    How about the characters who have access to information, and they learn magic? This is an awesome way, as maybe I can find an old book, thumb to the correct page, and learn how to harness the powers that only a few possess. You never know.

    Then come the characters who find someone else with magic, and they cut a deal to access this power for themselves. I don’t know many folks who have these answers, but that would be kind of cool.

    Magic can be found in our natural world if we only know where to look. Sometimes heroes connect with someone who can guide them to help them find this special place, the spirit or force where these powers flow.

    What about the wands, swords, and other artifacts that somehow possess the powers that our hero wants or needs? These heroes are powerless without them, but wouldn’t we all want something like this? I would!

    My favorite is when the hero uncovers powers from within, but it has nothing to do with birthright, but all to do about their own will. They are guided by a mentor who helps them by opening a place deep within them. I feel we all possess this kind of magic and can do wonderful things we never thought we could do. It’s up to us.

    There are so many great ways our fantasy heroes find their powers

    As promised in my last post, I am including chapter 6 from The Rings: Journey Beneath Sirok. This is Book III in The Elias Chronicles. The hero, Elias, uncovers his powers in chapters 5, 6, 7 and 8 with the help of his mentor, Tas.

    Each of these chapters Elias learns more about his powers as his mentor, guides him to uncovering his powers and magic within and how they are part of a greater source. Like I said last time, pretty cool, huh?

    The chapters are:

    • 5 – Tas (last post)
    • 6 – The Endless Within
    • 7 – The Truths
    • 8 – Dancing Souls

    So here’s the next chapter… the next two are coming soon.

    6

    The Endless Within

    First, Tas taught him rhythmic breathing. “In slow…and even…out slow…easy. “You are not your mind, but you need to ‘see’ your mind. You need to see how it works, Elias,” Tas told him. “Cast no judgment, Elias—welcome no criticism, Elias—stand apart, away from your world.” Tas moved his hands together up and down. “You are like a stone pillar. You must stand alone—nothing can get you or get into you unless you let it.” Tas placed his hand over Elias’ heart. “You see peace. You feel peace. You are free from evil, and you want to share this bliss with everyone.”

    With hours left in the day, Tas asked Elias to meditate and not to utter one word until the sun sunk beneath the green hills. Tas asked him to spend the day and watch him and his actions. 

    Tas dove into the water and swam to a tall stone pillar that protruded high into the sky. He climbed to the top. Elias followed and climbed with confidence to the top. With energy and strength that matched Tas’, though a little slower. They stood in silence and viewed the world from its pinnacle as the Turul flew close by.            

    Again, Tas dove into the water, swam to the shore, sat on a slab of limestone, and meditated. Elias stood still and watched Tas until he sat in his familiar pose. Elias twisted his waist from side to side, inhaled, and dove into the crisp, clear water below. He swam to where Tas was sitting. 

    As he looked for a place to rest, Elias chose to sit on the warm sand and closed his eyes. He concentrated on his breathing as he took in the air slowly and evenly and out easy and even. As Tas taught him, he wiped clean all the thoughts that bounced in his head. It was difficult to do, but he continued to focus. Like the stone pillar, he saw himself as tall and strong. He was formidable. As he felt he was part of the Earth, he felt warmth move through him like a wave of strength. Is this what peace feels like? He thought.

    Moments later, Tas stood and walked to the edge of the water. A foamy wave gently washed up on his feet. Elias opened his eyes with a few blinks, got up, and walked near where Tas stood. Squatting, Tas picked up a stone that could fit in the palm of his hand. He slowly stood and brought his arm back and behind him in one motion. He tilted his head and closed one eye. His arm snapped forward, and he flung the stone with super speed. Elias was shocked. The stone hit the perch where they had stood earlier in the day.

    “Wow. How’d you do that? I mean, it really took off. I didn’t think it would ever come down. Will you show me?”

    “In due time, Elias. Now I asked you to say nothing until the sun has sunk beneath the hills.”

    “You’re right—sorry.”

    Tas said nothing but looked away, so Elias did not see the smile that took over his face.

    _______________________

    Night came, and a half-moon shone in the sky. Tas and Elias sat by a fire on the shore. Elias dared not to say anything even though his curfew was over. They heard nothing but the gentle rush of the water that flowed close to their feet and then back out. Without warning, beams of colorful light appeared from all of the stone pillars in the water and glimmered upward. Elias looked around and did not believe what he saw.

    “Those lights, Tas, what are they? They seem to be shooting up from those rocks.” 

    “Those lights are special. Every color known to man comes together and pierces the vast nothingness—the dark. It is brilliant, yes?”

    “How, how…”

    “In due time. In due time you will learn about the lights.

    So Elias, what did you learn today?” 

    “Huh?” he answered as he continued to stare at the lights. “Um…well … I must always start with what’s inside of me before I can expect to know where I’m going and what I’m going to do there.”

    Tas turned to Elias. With pursed lips, he slowly nodded. “Yes, of course, Elias—you knew that was going to be on the test. But I told you that. Tell me what came from you.”

    As he leaned back on his elbows and looked directly at Tas, Elias asked, “You don’t make any of this easy, do you?”

    Tas leaned back on his elbows as well and let out a laugh so loud it echoed from pillar to pillar.

    “Okay, let me think for a moment.” Elias looked up to the brilliance and energy of the lights that split the night. He could not stop staring at this mystery. He then gazed at the outline of the half-moon. He looked at Tas. “Okay, okay, I got it. This place—this place can be real. Yes, it can exist. I mean, what’s holding us back? Water, sun, air, trees—life; nothing here is complicated. It seems so simple, and everything seems so rich.”

    “Yes, Elias, it is a man who makes things complicated. It is a man who wants more than his fair share. It is a man who makes the decisions. He wants power.”

    “Why is that, do you suppose?” asked Elias as he looked back at the lights.

    “Because of The Two Powers.”

    “The Two Powers? What?” Elias asked.   

    “Because of the contrasts. Of the many contrasts, The Two Powers make all the difference, and One Power sometimes overshadows the other.” Tas stood up, stretched his long arms on either side and looked upward. He inhaled the fragrant, clean air and then exhaled. He looked at Elias, squatted in front of him, and said, “The Two Powers I am talking about are simply known as good and evil.’’

    “Everyone knows about good and evil. So Tas, what

    does this have to do with me, and where am I headed?” 

    “You will learn more, Elias—in due time.” Tas walked

    toward the lights.

    Elias rolled his eyes and said, “Tas, don’t get me wrong, but I didn’t come here to spend time and just hang out. I’ve got to get what I need and find Zoltan. He needs help.”

    Tas turned back to Elias and said, “Impetuous Elias, that’s what you are. Let me tell you how you will get what you need. First, you will spend more time with me. Then I will ask you to leave. At that time, you will discover where you must go from here.”

    “Okay—I got it so far,” Elias said as he sat up and wrapped his arms around his knees.

    “Good—I will learn just like you.”

    “Huh?” Elias stood, stretched, and walked toward Tas. 

    Tas turned to Elias. “You heard me. I don’t have all the answers, but they will come to us somehow. But this is what I do know. You will seize a power that you will find in your soul. A power all man has but seldom uses. Call it intuition, call it a sixth sense, or call it a message from the creator of the cosmos. Whatever you call it, you will understand what this power is saying to you. It is the connection between thought and heart. It’s the Endless Within.”

    He looked puzzled and said, “Endless Within?”

    “Of course—the Endless Within!”

    “So this Endless Within…does it have something to do with these lights? 

    “Oh, it very well might.” Tas stood and walked to a smooth slab of stone. He lay down and became silent like the night. Elias looked over at him and expected him to say or do something, but he lay motionless. Elias held his open palms out to either side and shook his head.

    “Really? Hey, Tas, what are you doing?”

    “I’m trying to sleep.”

    “What? We’re in the middle of something here,” Elias blurted.

    The palette of lights that emanated from the pillars mesmerized Elias. Frustrated, he looked back at a sleeping Tas and shook his head. As he felt the strain of a long day, Elias tried to hold back a yawn, but another one followed. He rubbed his eyes and scratched the back of his neck. He nestled up near a stone ledge to his side, and, light or no light, he fell asleep.

    Look for the next chapter when Elias learns about “The Truths”.

    If you enjoyed this post, you may like these: Hero’s Journey Monomyth;Why Fantasy is a Good Read; YA Fantasy Trilogy: Saving the World One Book at a Time; Fantasy Fiction and Real Life are the Same; Storytelling Within a Story, What Mentors Do Best.

    About E.G. Kardos

    I am a fiction writer and the author of five books. My writing draws inspiration from the beauty surrounding us all—both in nature and in each other. Spirituality, friendship, love, and our connection to the universe inspire me to write.  Here’s more about me and my books.

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  • Ways Our Fantasy Heroes Find Their Magical Powers: Part I

    E.G. Kardos

    Our Fantasy Heroes Find Their Powers

    Our fantasy heroes find their magical powers in many ways. But it’s not so different than how we find our own superpowers as we navigate the uncharted paths of our own lives.

    Photo by Keitma 

    Yep, we all have magical or superpowers if we only take the time and look inside.

    Read on and you will see what I mean.

    Reading, watching, and writing fantasy has been a pleasure of mine for my entire life. My imagination has run wild, and I am still searching for my superpowers. However, when I began writing my series, The Elias Chronicles, I knew exactly how Elias might find, uncover, and use his powers. It was fun to see it unfold. I felt they were my powers too. I’m not the only one who has felt this way– readers too tell me they felt the powers along with Elias.

    With intentionality and seriousness, every fantasy writer grapples with how their hero is unique and how best to show this uniqueness. How fantasy heroes find their powers is central to their being as well as crucial to the entire story. Many times it is in how the hero finds their powers or their magic that influences their use of them as well. These actions help to flesh out and define who the hero is and what they stand for.

    Here are Some Ways Our Fantasy Heroes Find Their Magical Powers

    Some are born with it. That’s the easiest way. Although I love these characters, I feel like I did when I was hanging around with the “cool” kids growing up. Why them? I would ask. I think there are many other ways our hero can become “the chosen one”…

    …so here are more ways.

    Characters might find their powers from someplace within them. Some event or situation in their lives triggers an emotion, and they begin to use their powers without even knowing it. They realize they have it—they have powers. This is a favorite of mine as I always think that maybe some event in my life with spark my unique power.

    Heroes that we love are sometimes the children of a divine or cosmic power or god. These heroes are great, and I love them as well. Unfortunately for me, I won’t be getting any suprpowers this way.

    How about the characters who have access to information, and they learn magic? This is an awesome way, as maybe I can find an old book, thumb to the correct page, and learn how to harness the powers that only a few possess. You never know.

    Then come the characters who find someone else with magic, and they cut a deal to access this power for themselves. I don’t know many folks who have these answers, but that would be kind of cool.

    Magic can be found in our natural world if we only know where to look. Sometimes heroes connect with someone who can guide them to help them find this special place, the spirit or force where these powers flow.

    What about the wands, swords, and other artifacts that somehow possess the powers that our hero wants or needs? These heroes are powerless without them, but wouldn’t we all want something like this? I would!

    My favorite is when the hero uncovers powers from within, but it has nothing to do with birthright, but all to do about their own will. They are guided by a mentor who helps them by opening a place deep within them. I feel we all possess this kind of magic and can do wonderful things we never thought we could do. It’s up to us.

    There are so many great ways our fantasy heroes find their powers

    In this post and my next three, I am sharing four chapters from The Rings: Journey Beneath Sirok. This is Book III in The Elias Chronicles. Each of these chapters Elias learns more about his powers as his mentor, Tas, guides him to uncovering the powers within and how they are part of a greater source. Pretty cool, huh?

    He pulls it together so that he is ready to continue his quest.

    The chapters are:

    • 5 – Tas
    • 6 – The Endless Within
    • 7 – The Truths
    • 8 – Dancing Souls

    Yep, we all have superpowers if we only take the time and look inside. Read on and you will see what I mean. Look for the next three chapters coming soon.

    5

    Tas

    Exhausted and out of breath, Elias tread water in the crystal clear and calm waters around him. He looked around the cavern. It was enormous, with high curved walls like the inside of a seashell. It was fragrant like the lavender in Nattymama’s herb garden. A glow came from different points under the surface of the water and threw colors onto the walls and ceiling. Elias spun in a circle as he tried to make sense of it all. 

     He kicked his weary legs to power himself onto a large flat rock. With his last ounce of energy, he hoisted himself up and laid back so he could rest. He still had scraggly tufts and long strands of coarse green hair wrapped around both ankles, and some clung to his waist. After a moment, he sat up and began to pull the gunky strands from his legs. He looked at it in disgust and tossed it to the other side of the stone slab. Out of the corner of his eye, he saw a lone man that sat on the other side of the cave. The man was very still. 

    That must be him, he thought. Tas had very long black hair, which he had pulled back behind his head. Tall and lean, he wore only red baggy pants that hung from his small waist. He had colorful tattoos that covered his muscular brown arms and back. His eyes were wide and enchanting. They were perhaps his most remarkable characteristic. They were the color of dark shiny gems. 

    Tas sat undisturbed. His legs were crossed, and his back was straight. He rested his hands on his knees. He held his hands so his thumb and index finger connected and formed a perfect “O.” He pointed his chin upward toward the ceiling. 

    Not moving a muscle, Elias sat still so he could watch him. He did not know whether to call out to Tas or wait for Tas to call him. Elias was still exhausted and knew he wasn’t thinking clearly. The fight he braved had finally caught up with him. He rubbed his arms and legs as his head throbbed. Things began to look fuzzy, so he laid back. His eyelids began to close as the thoughts in his head started to make no sense. He drifted off to sleep.

    Whether it was for a few minutes or hours, Elias woke to find Tas standing over him. With one foot on either side of Elias’ chest, he stared down at him. Elias’s eyelids fluttered open, and he tried to focus on the figure above him. His body automatically tensed as he remembered when he had met the Sarkany the very same way. Only the Sarkany had his sword and pointed the tip to the amulet on his chest. At that moment, Elias became fully awake and began to wonder what would happen next. Tas’ face was stern, and he gritted his teeth, but then he let out a guttural, echoing laugh. Elias relaxed and sensed everything was fine—he was in no danger. Tas stepped aside and held out his hand to help pull Elias up. Tas crouched next to him and peered into his eyes.

    “So you must be the Elias I’ve heard so much about.”

    “Yes, and you must be the Tas I’ve heard so much about, too.

    “Why yes. That is who I am to you—today.”

    “Today? What do you mean?” 

    “I am known differently and by many names to different souls. My Earth mother knows me differently than you, as do my many sisters and brothers. Yet, all seem to choose to call me whatever they want. I despise labels…and names are only labels.”

    “I get what you’re saying. People judge, and they shouldn’t, but we all have to have a name.” 

    “I suppose you are correct. Tas is as good as any other”.

    So tell me…how is Nattymama? Oh, Nattymama—I do love that precious soul. For some reason, she holds me in such high regard. Perhaps that is a label my ego likes. I suppose there is a great deal of truth to the idea that a prophet holds no regard among those who know him or her best—perhaps that is why she sent you to me.”

    “Prophet? Are you…”

    “Ooooohhhh, please do not get me wrong. I am not a prophet. I would say I am a compassionate soul. I nourish, I connect, I challenge, and I may even inspire… I love, I have faith, and above all, I have hope for our kind—but I’m not a prophet. Perhaps, I am a teacher,” he said as he wagged his finger and laughed. “I say all this to emphasize that we often overlook the value of what is or who is directly in front of each of us at any given time. All of us can do all these things I have said—we just need to listen to one another.”

    “I suppose you are right,” Elias answered and said what he thought he should say.

    “Labels do us no good,” Tas said as he sat down. All became quiet before Tas went on to say, “But, I will tell you. Nattymama is special.”

    “How did Nattymama send word to you about me?” Elias asked. “She couldn’t have made a trip like this to tell you about me.”

    “Don’t sell Nattymama short. She doesn’t have a chain holding her to her cottage, although it is quite a lovely place,” Tas said as he looked away fondly and then continued, “But, yes, you are correct, Elias. She did not come here, but she has her ways. If you must know, the Turul told me.” “First Zoltan and then Nattymama and now you…can everyone communicate with that bird but me?”

    “In due time, Elias. In due time you will see and hear things you have never witnessed before,” Tas said with outstretched arms. “Now, tell me, have you been meditating?”

    “Huh…what do you mean?”

    “Meditation—meditation. It refreshes the mind, body, and soul. To understand the world, we must understand the world in each of us. All of our thoughts, feelings, what we do, and why. What’s in each of us is as vast as the universe. Humans would do themselves a great service if they attempted to learn the world inside them before seizing the world beyond them.”             

    “WHAT? I don’t understand why you are telling me this. I need to get answers and be on my way. I don’t have time for a philosophy lesson,” Elias said as he shook his head and grew more confused.

    Tas boomed with laughter. “My, my…you do have the temperament of an artist now, don’t you? Yes, I was told you might say something like that…in due time, Elias. I remember being young and impetuous like you.”

    “What do you mean? You can’t be much older than me. What are you twenty—twenty-five?”

    “Let’s leave it at that. Don’t worry about such things. Now, the reason that we must start with meditation is because you will learn how to concentrate and focus. Little things in life that distract will bead away like water on a duck’s back. You must learn to focus. Where you will go, you must know your purpose, and learning about yourself will make this purpose come alive. Alive! Do you follow?”

    “Really? Meditate?”

    “Oh yes—really,” Tas answered with a big nod and a tight smile. “Yeeeeesssss, you must meditate. Your brain will connect with your heart, and that feeling will always save you.”

     “Okay, okay. I’m not so sure I understood you but let’s get this over with. I’m ready. Show me how,” he grumbled.

    “Slow down, Elias. Let us take a walk outside this carved out rock, and let me show you what the world could look like—how it could look, sound, feel, smell, and taste.”         

    “I just came in from the world. I saw what it looked like. It wasn’t pretty. I don’t get what this has to do with where I’m headed. Can you give me what I need and point me in the right direction, and I will be on my way?”

    As he paid little attention to Elias’ impatient demand, Tas continued, “Bear with me. What exists only exists in your mind. Others tell us things, and we believe them. We even look for it since it has become so ingrained in our thinking. But it doesn’t have to be this way. It, however, has been the way of man for thousands of years. I’ll let you in on a secret—this place, where we stand right now, doesn’t, well, exist.”

    “Huh?”

    “It’s better to show you what doesn’t exist than to tell you. Please, follow me.”

    Tas started to walk toward a waterfall that poured from the ceiling of the chamber. Elias looked up and scratched his head. He looked over his shoulder at Elias, then calmly nodded and continued toward the cascade of white water that flowed down the glistening solid wall. Elias caught up with Tas, and they walked side by side.

    With a hiccup, Elias asked, “Hey, Tas, is there an opening up there where that waterfall begins?”

    “But, of course, there is an opening—there is always an opening. There is always a way, although it may be so slight and no one sees it.”

    They approached the waterfall, stood in front of the pounding water, and felt its cool spray. It felt good on Elias’ worn muscles and bruised skin. Elias looked to Tas, who stood with his eyes shut. 

    “Okay, Tas, now what?” 

    Tas opened his eyes and looked at Elias. As he did, he extended his arm through the powerful flow of water. Like a proscenium arch, the falling flow of water separated like a curtain, and a blinding blue and white light shone through the opening. Tas stepped forward, as did Elias. They took another step together and were now in a world that didn’t exist. 

    Before them was a body of water so still and blue that Elias was surprised. Jutting upward from the surface of the water, and scattered about were countless natural stone pillars many stories high. Wispy trees and other plants grew haphazardly on its uneven surfaces. In the distance, lush green hills separated the sky from the water. The air stirred with energy and lifted scents of lilac and other flowers and bushes. The sun shone brightly in the sky and tingled over Elias’ skin. There were no buildings, houses, or cottages. No other living creature showed themselves, with the exception of the Turul, who, with ease, glided high above on a current. Tas looked at Elias with a grin that stretched across his face. 

    “This, Elias, is the world we could live in. This place is good, and it brings joy to me. There is nothing mystical about this place—this that does not exist. Look around. There is nothing here that is not in the world—well, other than man. Here, however, is a balance—a harmony. It is the way of nature.”

    “This looks nothing like where I’ve been. I mean, my home is beautiful, but this place is, well, it’s different. It definitely doesn’t look like the path that led me here.”

    “The path getting here, or there, is the path. Here is here. They do not have to be the same,” Tas said. “And you, too, live in beauty, but it is an island if you know what I mean,” 

    “An island?”

    “Why yes. The world is full of islands of beauty—could be a place…or people, but nevertheless, they are islands that could be joined.” 

    Elias walked to the edge of the water, knelt down, cupped the water, and drank. “So this isn’t real?” Not waiting for an answer, Elias turned, looked behind him, and continued. “And just right there,” Elias pointed to the direction, he presumed, where he came, “beyond that rock is where I came from, and it was real. This is all very bizarre. What is this place, and why did Nattymama send me here?” 

    “In due time, Elias. In due time you will learn about the powers of this nonexistent place, this matrix, and why Nattymama sent you here.” Elias stood and walked to where Tas was now sitting. Elias’ stomach felt heavy, and his mind clouded over. He looked from side to side and then folded his arms across his chest.

    “Who are you? Better yet, what are you?” Elias asked. 

    “I’m Tas! Simple as that, but I’ve been described in so many ways. Some call me a dabbler in magic, a sorcerer, a magician, and some have called me a mystic. I am none of those or perhaps all of those. I hope I am more. I am a man.”

    “Okay, TAS—a man. That’s your answer to my question? I mean, really…” 

    Tas bounced up and spun around one time with his arms outstretched, “Okay, okay, Elias, you deserve more. I am a man who works to uncover what could be. I am a man who finds balance. I am a man who learns to come closer to the creator of the universe. I am a man who finds kindness and compassion should drive our actions. I am a man who works for good.”

    “So you are a holy man? A priest or rabbi or someone like that?”

    “Again, those are mere labels. Ah, ah, you are quite inquisitive. You are a curious soul, and I see you are ready for much more. I will let you in on a secret. Scientists, and the like, know that we humans use a tiny percent of our brains on any good day. You’ve heard that?”

    “Yes, I’ve heard something like that.”       

    “Well, I have uncovered the truths that allow us to use more than a small percent of what we have upstairs. It is when we connect our thoughts with the most powerful energy in our own bodies—our heart—that moves us closer to realizing what our power really looks like.”

    “Awesome. But I don’t know what that means. Now, will you give me what I need so I can get out of here?” Elias asked and shook his head. 

    “In due time. I am here for you, Elias. You will learn to help yourself, as I will find joy in being your guide. When we know ourselves, we may truly know our rightful direction. No need for you to be an island in the hideous sea that is the world.”

    Clearly, he did not pay attention to Tas’ last words, as Elias asked, “So—this place, you said it doesn’t exist?”

    “Let me put it this way. You cannot understand this place because you live in a world where man, too often, makes the meaningless appear to be desirable. This is a shame. Many times, because of his tiny brainpower, man doesn’t consider the water, the sky, the air, the fire, the animals, or the insects that slither about. We need all of these things. Where you are now— this non-place—I would have to say is meaningful and, as such, doesn’t exist. At least it doesn’t exist beyond the boundaries. With exceptions, this is a place that the living rarely comes to.”

    “Huh?”

    “Never mind that for now…this place is easy to figure out. Your world is confusing. Man, because of man and no other reason, lives in opposites. We have love, so we have hate. We have rich, so we must have poor. We have beauty, and we have what is ugly. We have good, and therefore, we must have evil. It would be absurd of me to say because we have air, we have love, and because we have hate, we have water…man can’t seem to stop comparing. This is all up to a man.”

    Elias walked back to the water’s edge, turned to Tas, and asked, “Are you saying we must know how to make sense of these opposites?” 

    “Yes, as long as man exists. But I am actually saying much more. First, man must learn to balance the opposites. If not, we are doomed. We must always fight against what is wrong, even though what is wrong may live with us forever. We might never be able to destroy what is evil, but that doesn’t give us any reason to stop fighting for what is good. Our choices make us who we are, not what surrounds us.”

    “So Tas, what am I supposed to do about it?”

    “In due time.”

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  • Storytelling Within a Story, What Mentors Do Best

    E.G. Kardos

    Storytelling within a story. What’s that all about?

    Many of the most powerful stories ever told feature a mentor who guides the protagonist throughout their journey. Don’t we all love mentors, both in real life and in fiction? I know I do.

    Hopefully we’re connected with some amazing women and men who help us along the complex jounrey of our lives. A few names come to my mind who guided me at various times of my life, and they have made a difference. I bet you can rattle off a name or two as well.

    In literature, thse mentors are crucial to the flow of the story, and many times, they are characters who we love.

    Some fictional favorites come to mind: Gandalf, Yoda, Miss Jean Brodie, Haymitch, Mr. Keating, Helen Burns and Dumbledore. Great stories with memorable characters.

    There are so many more who enrich the stories we read, we tell and we see.

    Common Qualities

    Side view of a senior man with expressive features and a contemplative look in a dark setting.

    Mentors in books inspire the protagonists’ ongoing journey of understanding, growth, transformation, and connection to their true selves. They help the character make sense of their relationship with a power greater than themselves… and we get to experience a spectacular ride. 

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    All mentors we meet in fiction share the common quality of possessing a strong and natural desire to give of themselves for someone else’s benefit.

    Above all, they have wisdom and that’s why they guide the protagonist with storytelling within the story .

    They know how to build genuine and healthy trust, and their timing is perfect. They understand exactly when, where, and how to share their wisdom to the protagonist at that very moment they need it the most.

    Like Us, Protagonists Learn Through Stories

    Storytelling within the story is done with vivid imagery, with allegory and symbolism. Sometimes these stories push the protagonist to act or give them a signal or clue of what’s to come. Sometimes it just to teach and to remind the protagonist of what they may already know.

    They Build Trust and are Relatable

    Mentors, with their stories, build trust. Relatable, mentors often reveal their own weaknesses and flaws. They are like the protagonist in some way–and they are like us.

    If a mentor doesn’t show compassion or has empathy, they are not a mentor.

    Wisdom is knowledge tempered by experience, and because of this, they make sound judgments. But they can’t tell the protagonist this.

    Oh no, they must find out on their own.

    So there story within the story is crucial for the protagonist to begin to understand themselves, their purpose and their quest.

    The protagonist of the stories we love, keep the ideas and the stories the mentor shares in the forefront of their minds as they decide the best move to take on their, sometimes, lonely path.

    Lonely or not, their path is usually dangerous, complex and tricky so, even with a mentor and their sage advice, it is not easy. 

    In the series, The Elias Chronicles, Elias’ mentor is Zoltan. The sorcerer, guides Elias through dark and uncertain times to help him to understand why he must take his journey—one he reluctantly began.

    Here’s an example of storytelling with a story. Enjoy a chapter from the first book, The Amulet: Journey to Sirok in this trilogy where Zoltan tells a story to Elias about The Tree of Life.

    18

    Tree of Life

    Exhausted from their journey to and from Budapest, Elias slept late the next morning. When he rose, the only sign of Zoltan was the breakfast coffee being kept warm on hot coals and a hardboiled egg on a small plate. Elias ate in silence. 

    He walked out of the cave into bright sunshine and sat on the ground under The Tree of Life in solitude with his thoughts. He sat at the exact spot he had fallen to his worst fear. Cimbora lay at his feet. 

    Trying desperately to tie together all his experiences, he brooded and wondered whether or not he was ready to confront the Sarkany. Zoltan walked up the path in silence and sat on a stump about twenty paces away. Minutes passed.

    “Elias, do you know why I am able to rest my weary bones on this old and decaying stump?”

    Elias looked up at him, said nothing but answered him by shaking his head.

    “Fear, Elias, fear.”

    “Huhh?”

    “Legend has it that the enormous tree, or the one which is giving you shade right now, produced a sapling that was growing as a healthy tree. A young boy nurtured the tree and would visit it frequently. It brought him joy to see it grow, weathering harsh winters and dry summers. That sapling grew for half a century and, as that boy became a man, he came back from time to time. Nevertheless, he would return to sit in solitude to ponder life and reflect on what he found in his soul. 

    “Although the man did not know for sure, he hoped the tree he cared for was an offshoot of the Tree of Life just mere paces away. Over the years as he watched it grow, he would admire them both—The Tree of Life and the tree he had nurtured. His contribution to its growth humbled him.

    “When the man became old, he came back to spend time and sit under the tree with a book. One day when he was hiking to the where the tree grew, he heard a troubling sound. He hastened his approach. He dropped his book and ran, and out of breath he approached the tree. Shocked, he realized it was too late. A young man with an axe had one or two final swings before the tree would fall. To the old man’s horror, he saw the tree that once pointed to the heavens fall to Earth.

    “‘What did you do? That was a precious tree and a one-of-a-kind gift to this planet! With all the other trees in this forest, why this one? There must be many trees closer to your home for your fire,’ the old man screamed. 

    “The young man replied, ‘Oh, this is not for firewood. I had to destroy this tree because I feared its magnificence would overshadow The Tree of Life. It may have become too beautiful and rival what we have come to know and depend on.’

    “‘You idiot!’ the old man said. ‘You fear the wrong thing. Fear not what may become beautiful and magnificent. There’s plenty of room for what is good. Embrace it and become part of it. Destroying what might be, dishonors today and disregards our hope for tomorrow.’ 

    “With that last swing only moments earlier, the old man knew, then, that there was nothing he could have done to save the life of the tree. There was only one place the old man could go from there—forward. With great difficulty and from a place of grace, the old man forgave the young man for his foolish wrongdoing, lowered his head, and he walked away in great sorrow. 

    “A month later, the old man came back with renewed joy in his heart knowing that the time he had spent nurturing the tree and sitting under her shade during his long life gave him refuge from a tired and fearful world. For that, he was grateful, and this memory would be cherished. However, on this day, he brought with him a sapling that he knew he would never live long enough to enjoy its shade but knew others would. He planted it and took care of it until he died. Some say they still see the man in the woods. Some say they feel his presence.”

    “So, Zoltan, which tree did he plant?”

    “It is the tree to my right. It is the tree that is home to the songbirds which bring me such delight. Listen, I hear one singing.” 

    Elias looked up and saw a beautiful tree, and then back to Zoltan. The music of the songbird came to the forefront and the air was full of life. They smiled.

    “Do you know what else the old man realized?”

    “I think so.”

    “Good Elias. Well?”

    “This is just my guess, but aren’t all trees…well all things, like The Tree of Life.”

    “How so?”

    “We live on a round ball. Doesn’t that make us all at the center of the world?” Elias asked.

    “Precisely. All beings are of value and have their place—no being is more worthy than another. I see you have been thinking. Now do you see what I am talking about?”

    “Little by little. I’m starting to understand myself,” said Elias

    “Good, Elias, good! Will you tell me what you have learned from your experiences of your quest so far?”

    “My deepest fear is not failure to follow the path to my dream. My true fear is what will become of me if I succeed. If I follow my heart, will others still love me for who I will become? Will I be able to handle success? Will I be honest and kind? Will I become arrogant? Will I still be me?”

    “My dear man, let me add that we do a disservice to ourselves and the light of humanity that has come before us, to purposefully be anything less than our authentic self. We cannot strive to be anything less than who we truly are.”

    “Understanding is one thing—doing it is another,” Elias said.

    “Yes, Elias you are right. I am embarrassed to say this is why I lost my finger. The finger that made me different and reminded me of who I was and still am. I so desperately wanted to be like the others that I…that I…”

    “Say no more,” interrupted Elias.

    “What I will say is that I regret my actions. I don’t want you to regret yours. So, as I see it, you have no choice in the matter. We must love ourselves enough to fully embrace our true nature. As our self-belief magnifies, we attract others to our light.”

    “Zoltan, you have it all together.”

     “Elias, a day does not go by without reminding myself what makes my heart beat. Our very nature is genuine—it’s real. It is how we were made.

     “I now know the significance of the amulet,” said Elias.

     “Shush, Elias. Since you know, and I know, we have no need to discuss it—do we?”

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  • Mentors in Young Adult Fantasy 

    E.G. Kardos

    Mentors are crucial in storytelling, especially in the genre of fantasy. Aside from the “hero” in the story, the mentor is my favorite character. A good villain, for me, comes in third. The mentor and the protagonist’s relationship is special, and that is one reason I chose to share the following excerpt of The Elixir: Journey On. The Elixir is Book III of The Elias Chronicles.

    Mentors Carry a Heavy Burden

    Good mentors do many things: they guide the protagonist through an evolutionary process by providing experience and knowledge and encourage resourcefulness and independent thinking. They support our hero in any way they can. Wisdom, a characteristic overlooked in the “real” world, is cherished in the fantasy world. Sometimes mentors merely encourage and show they care

    All Mentors Posess the Power of Empowerment

    Mentors empower the hero to make decisions, and sometimes it may be the wrong choice, but our hero learns from mistakes, and mentors know this.

    Ultimately, our hero achieves personal growth even if they can’t save the world—this time.

    Some Mentors of Note

    Think of Gandalf and Frodo: Dumbledore and Harry; Aslan and Peter, Lucy, Susan, and Edmund; and in each of the three books of The Elias Chronicles, Zoltan and Elias.

    I’m sure you have a few mentors in mind as well.

    “The black moment is the moment when the real message of transformation is going to come. At the darkest moment comes the light”

    Joseph Campbell

    In The Elias Chronicles, a reader can start with any book as each is a stand-alone story. Saying that, I think to appreciate Elias’ journey and his development, I’d start with the first book, The Amulet: Journey to Sirok, and then read the second and third in order, The Rings: Journey Beneath Sirok and The Elixir: Journey On. In each you will find the mentor, Zoltan and the hero, Elias as well as many other colorful characters that will help guide or thwart Elias from his quest.

    Enjoy the excerpt…and let me know what you think. Who are your favorite mentors?

    5

    Climb The Stem

    Weary from his encounter with the Sea Serpent, Elias stretched out squarely in the middle of the boat’s deck. His thoughts wandered at best, but without notice, they pulled him back to some frightening moments. He, however, felt gratified for untangling the scary event and helping a mom. Images of her huge bony head that disagreed with her graceful cylindrical body were imprinted in his mind. Worst of all was her shriek, and he winced as he brought it to mind. What did it all mean? The serpent—the journal—his exile? Of all places, why was he here? While wondering where land could be hiding, the faces of his friends and family overpowered all his thoughts. All he could think was, will he ever see them again?

                Restless, he fiddled with a thick, coarse rope coiled to one side as he looked to the sky. Drained by his rocky voyage, he remained listless on his back as he, biding time, picked up the dagger and examined it closely. Squinting, he focused on every scratch or nuance on the cold metal blade. He delicately touched the tip of his index finger on the tiny point, and as he did, he mouthed the sound ‘ow’ while his nose twisted up on one side. Still on his back, he grabbed the hilt with two hands, and with outstretched arms, he pointed it to the blur of the heavens, ruminating about his first night on Sirok. That’s when he plucked a powerful sword from a secret vault told to him by Nattymama. The sword, he mused, saved his life on a couple of occasions when he skillfully severed the heads of the Sarkany—the three-headed, shape-shifting dragon. “Existo verus ut vestri,” he whispered, followed by, “Be true to yourself. Think of that…that was written on the blade itself, and I didn’t even know it at the time…can’t complain, as it served me well, but this oversized pen knife has done right by me too.”

                WHOOSH. At that moment, jarring him from his comfort, he heard a gigantic splash only twenty paces or so from the bow of the boat. The wave it made jostled the little craft as he jumped to his feet. With a wrinkled brow and his jaw hanging low, he peered from side to side. Keeping one eye on the white-capped waves, he reached back to grab his dagger. Bubbles jetted to the surface of the choppy water, and he waited to see if anything would pop up. Only a second later, bobbing before him, the back of a man’s head emerged, gasping uncontrollably for air. Ardently treading water, he turned, and Elias saw who thrashed about before him. He could barely believe his eyes.

                “ZOLTAN. Is that really you?”

                Zoltan, now exhausted but surprisingly calm, answered Elias. “It is I,” he gasped. “…and I came so very close to landing on the dry planks… of your vessel…right beside you.” Water splashed a few times in his face.

                “…but…but I can’t believe it,” Elias said, reacting in amazement.

                “Not to be rude, my boy, but I’m not interested in conversing at this point. Be a good man and put down your weapon to throw me a line to welcome me aboard.”           

                “Oh yeah…sorry.” With a cold slap, Elias was brought back to reality as he hurriedly tied one end of the rope to an iron ring attached to the floorboards of the deck and tossed the bulk of the looped hemp to Zoltan. He wrapped it around his arms, and like a vice, he held on securely with both hands. With somewhat of a struggle, like reeling in a blue marlin, Elias was able to tow Zoltan up and over the edge of the side of the boat. He delivered him safely to the dry deck of the lifeboat. Both Zoltan and Elias collapsed like a sack of potatoes.

                “Zoltan, are you alright? What are you doing here? Why is…”

                “Not all at once,” Zoltan said, pulling himself up to a seated position, clearing his throat between words and poking his pinky finger in one ear. “I’ve come chasing you, Elias. I sent you here…do you have a blanket in there?” he asked, pointing to the large wooden box.

                Elias froze. “Wait, what? You sent me here?” His jaw jutted forward, and he scowled at his guest.

                Zoltan kindly smiled and exhaled. He shrugged his shoulders and joined his hands together in a prayerful fashion.

                “I knew it. I don’t know why I reacted so surprised. I knew something was up, especially since I found my dagger here, but…why?” Elias said, folding his arms against his chest.

                “My good boy, I could see no other way. You have the gift, the donum…now the blanket, if you will.” Zoltan stretched out his shivering hands.

                “The donum…the DONUM…this gift is a curse! What else…what else can you tell me?” Elias retrieved a moldy moth-eaten blanket from the box and gently wrapped it around Zoltan’s shoulders.

                “If you settle yourself down one iota, I will tell you—you temperamental artists are something else,” he kindheartedly said under his breath.

                Elias’ shoulders sank, and he let out a sigh as he sat next to the old man.   

    “I detected something sinister as the smoke of the kingdom wafted our way,” Zoltan said with an easy monotone. Now for a cup of coffee. Do you have one?”

                “What? Coffee? Are you serious? We’re on a banged-up boat in the middle of nowhere. What are you thinking?”

                “I see your point,” Zoltan said as he placed his hands one over the other and quickly clapped his upper hand to his lower, at which time a hot pot of steaming coffee and two mugs hovered before them.       

                “Awesome, Zoltan. You’ll have to teach me that one,” Elias said as he briefly forgot about his frustration with his new and unasked-for adventure.

                “Oh, you will learn how and quite a bit more. Now pour the

    coffee, and let’s talk,” said Zoltan as a soft, salty breeze gave him a slight stir.

                Elias poured the coffee and looked with admiration at his old friend. “So what can you tell me?”

                Using both hands to sip from the mug, Zoltan said, “I can tell you very little at this point. I have a morsel of information to share, but not much. Believe me when I say I know very little.”

                Short-fused, Elias blurted out, “A morsel. A morsel! You send me here, and YOU CAN’T TELL ME WHY?” You know I was just attacked by a sea serpent and…”

                “Good for you, Elias,” Zoltan interjected gleefully, cutting Elias off mid-sentence. “You must have fared quite well as I do not see any hideous blemishes on you, and I don’t see the serpent anywhere,” Zoltan added while looking out to the vast gray rolling waves.            

                Collecting his thoughts, Elias knew his frayed nerves would lead him somewhere he’d rather keep to himself and took a deep breath. “I’m sorry Zoltan…I’m tired and so… alone.” Elias looked down at his hands, sniffed a few times, and then rubbed his nose. He looked out to the sea as a breeze caught his floppy hair and tousled it in a few directions. “Like I was abandoned until you showed up. I just don’t know what to make of all this. It’s time for me to go home and do what I want to do. I earned it, after all. That’s why I traveled to find you in the first place—to find out who I am and do what I love. And traveling to the Under World to find you and all I did there. I’ve done enough—I’ve earned it.”

                “You earned it? Yes, I can see your point. First of all, thank you as you saved me from the clutches of Ordak, and you are quite humble as you set the oppressed folks of the kingdom free. But my good boy, I am sorry to say that, now, those things matter not, at least not for the short run.”

                “Huh? I feel my life is out of control.”

                “Elias, life is full of the unexpected, but we seem to forget that and think life SHOULD be full of the ‘expected,’ Zoltan said in a very calm but exacting tone. “You are in the middle of, shall I say, a twist and, for that matter, a turn—and perhaps another twist. I must say you are who you are whether you like it or not, and you should think of it as a privilege to be you and grab hold of every moment of your life. It is up to you to make the most of it. Let me pour you another cup of coffee.” 

                “Okay, okay, but I don’t like it, and I’m not talking about the coffee,” Elias said, sitting back and looking at the sea. It was now quiet as the endless waves that relentlessly wrapped themselves around the boat seemed like a warm embrace as they continued to lap lower against the sides. It was still. 

                “I know you are unhappy with me, and you have every right to be so, but in the end, you will understand. You will. Trust me.”

                Ignoring Zoltan’s words, Elias asked, “So tell me, how is everyone—Kelsa?”

                “She is just fine. I managed to redirect both her and Cimbora safely to a place where you will see them soon. Don’t ask me why, as I had to act quickly when Ordak was breathing down our necks—before our dear friends, the Bee People, whisked him away. Oh, that was such a special moment just hearing the hum.” They both laughed and sipped from their cups.

                “I think I know the moment—yeah, the exact moment. He almost picked up on what you were doing. I could tell you were doing something, but I had no clue,” said Elias. 

                “To tell you the truth, I was not so sure myself.” Zoltan winked.

                “And the others?” Elias asked abruptly, changing the subject.

                “Nattymama and your family are fine. Oh yes, and before I forget, you must understand that time counts differently there versus here. It may seem like only a minute to some but an eternity to others, but this will all be clearer to you later.”

                “You haven’t even told me where I’m going.”   

                “Oh yes. In a moment,” Zoltan replied with a light chuckle. “As far as the others, Lantos and Gaspar are back in their homes, I presume, and Akota is being celebrated by the Seraph people and the former Inhabitants of The Kingdom of Gold. And by the way, passing the ring to him has made all the difference for his people. You have shared the donum, and you have yet to realize your brilliance in doing so.” 

                Elias smiled, but he quickly looked down at the splintering planks below. Zoltan felt his angst and wanted to comfort him.

                “Oh yes, you may long for them and feel you are missing out—but you are not truly missing out as you are where you are supposed to be—that’s the difference. Elias, do not pine for what was or what you think is, nor reach for what you think might be. It is today that matters as we may, most assuredly, count the days we have lived, but we cannot even attempt to count the days ahead of us. Life does, indeed, have a starting point for all, but the endpoint is a mystery. But I dare say, life has a habit of going on whether we like it or not—even if we are in it or not,” said Zoltan.

                Elias said nothing but looked fondly at Zoltan, then turned and stared at the horizon. As he nodded, a wide smile came across his face as Zoltan sipped from the mug. At that moment, a sparkling aqua and sapphire-colored dragonfly landed on Elias’ knuckle. Without moving his head, he gazed down at the quiet and majestic creature.

                “We must be near land,” Elias’ eyes lit up as he kept still and looked intently at the dragonfly.

                “Elias, I believe you are correct. That little fellow reminds me of a story I was once told. A story that others have passed down over many years and, as time so masterfully can do, has gobbled up the author’s name. Would you like to hear a story?” 

                Elias faced Zoltan and looked into his eyes. He couldn’t help Zoltan’s allure as he looked into the recesses of his pupils. The eyes that have seen a thousand years. The eyes that have looked deep inside of him. Elias nodded and smiled.

                “A time not so long ago, there was a pond like any other pond—perhaps like the ones around your home or mine. Do you know the kind

    of pond I speak of?”

                “Sure, Zoltan, go on.”

                “Okay then… in the muddy water under the lily pads, there lived a little neighborhood of water bugs—cute little things. This tiny community lived a simple and predictable life in the murky water. Little concerned them, for the most part, so they were happy creatures. As it is with any community, sadness would come at peculiar times. On occasion, and without warning, a water bug would journey up the stem of a lily pad. To an onlooker in the water bug community, this was not a good sign.”

                “So the water bug crawled up the stem of a water lily—how is that sad?” asked Elias.

                “Well, Elias, all the water bugs knew was that when they saw one of their own make the climb, their friend or family member would never be seen again.” Zoltan paused and looked away.

                “That’s not much of a story. So the water bug climbed up the stem, and a hungry bird ate it. Great story, Zoltan,” Elias said, shaking his head.

                “Elias, my boy, that is not the end of the story—far from it. Would you allow me to proceed?”

                Elias nodded. “Sorry.”

                “Okay then. The water bugs knew they would never see their friend again. They, like you, thought the worst. They thought their friend was dead. 

    As it so happened one day, and with no warning to his family or friends, the littlest of water bugs felt an overpowering yearning to journey up that stem. However, he was determined to return to the community and tell his family and friends what he found on the other side. They pleaded with him not to go, but he did anyway. He began to climb the stem. When he reached the surface of the water, he journeyed out of the water onto a lily pad. Because of his climb, he was very tired, and the sun felt good. So the little water bug decided he must close his weary eyes and sleep. 

                During his nap, he changed. When he woke, he had turned into a beautiful aqua and sapphire dragonfly with graceful wings and a slender body created for flying. Therefore, that’s exactly what he did. He soared high above and looked at all below him. He skirted downward and skimmed the surface of the water. He saw new worlds in all its beauty. His perspective was new and fresh—one he thought never existed before that fateful day. 

                One day, while resting on the arm of a boy, he thought of his friends and family and how they must think he was now dead. It reminded him that he desperately wanted to tell them otherwise and share with them the joy he had found. He hovered over the surface of the water where his family and friends lived, and he could barely make out the little community below. The water was murky that day. He attempted to fly through the surface of the water, but when he tried to reemerge into the water, he could not. He tried and tried and tried to break the surface of the water to no avail. He could see the water bugs below as they continued their simple life. He wanted to explain how he was alive and how wonderful life really was. He wanted to talk about the fulfillment he felt.             

                Attempt after attempt, he thought differently about telling them and began to understand he was now in the place where he should be. He hoped that their time would come and they, too, would realize that they have wings and one day they would join him. With one last look, he knew what he had to do, and he took to flight, never to allow the past to hold him back. He knew he had to taste the wonders of what today brings.”

                 “So, I’m the dragonfly?” Elias smugly asked.

                “You? Maybe the both of us—our friends, too, perchance. But the story, albeit simple, tells more. Think about it.”

                “I see where it is about living and becoming, but it is also about death. Right?”

                “Oh, Elias, it is for you to grapple with—let us speak of it no more.”

                A huge smooth swell, the size of a modest house, mildly rolled under the lifeboat, placing them high above. As soon as they were at the pinnacle, they descended to a level where all they could see around them was a wall of water. As they evened out, the clouds vanished, and the placid wave slowly moved further away. Many smaller ones rapidly made their presence known as they slapped the boat in all directions. Elias and Zoltan held tight to the sides of the craft until all was calm.

                “What was that all about?” Elias said.

                “My boy, look over your shoulder, and you will see.”

                Elias turned, and a good five or six sea miles before them was an iridescent glow the size of a small island of purples, blues, and red. It twinkled in the bright sunlight. Like the waves, the oddity seemed to be covering something as its hues swayed and fluttered to greens, yellows, and orange. It was a magnificent sight.

                “Wow! I’ve never seen anything like it before,” said Elias.

                “Nor I…nor I.”

                “What do you think it is, Zoltan?”

                “There’s nothing like a good mystery than one that is about to unfold in front of our very eyes. Let’s wait and see.”

                As they got closer to the spectacle, they noticed that around the edges of the colors and lights seemed to unravel. Specs, as they thought, were drifting away, and as they did, the two saw rocks, trees, and a mountain.

                “Zoltan, they’re dragonflies. Millions of dragonflies.”

                “So they are. Very interesting,” Zoltan said, leaning toward Elias. “There is something I must tell you.”

    I hope you enjoyed the excerpt. Let me know what you think below.

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  • YA Fantasy Trilogy: Saving the World One Book at a Time

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    E.G. Kardos

    Writing a YA fantasy trilogy can be tricky. Writers and readers of fantasy think through many questions. Here are a few: does the reader have to start with the first book to make sense of the second and the third? Should I write the series so, if a reader chooses, they could start with the second, or even the third book before the first one? As a YA fantasy trilogy, should all the stories be clearly connected…a continuation…or just the hero’s next quest?

    These are valid questions for a writer –and a reader. In my fantasy trilogy, The Elias Chronicles , a reader can start with any book as each is a stand-alone story. Saying that, I think to appreciate Elias’ journey and his development, I’d start with the first book, The Amulet: Journey to Sirok, and then read the second and third in order, The Rings: Journey Beneath Sirok and The Elixir: Journey On.

    As a YA fantasy trilogy, each book is connected as the stories follow the one before. Saying that, I include just enough of the previous storyline so the reader can easily get into the story and begin to connect with the main character, Elias.

    What’s this YA Fantasy Trilogy About?

    Without giving away any spoilers, in The Amulet, Elias learns all about himself by way of a journey he must take to truly understand who he is.

    In The Rings he realizes a friend is in danger but before he can find him, Elias must harness the powers he uncovered in the first story to not only save his friend, but he learns he must alos save a community that has been ravaged by false promises.

    In Book III, The Elixir, Elias has been called to protect the elixir that if it lands in the wrong hands could bring destruction to the planet. What is the elixir?

    As each book is truly a stand-alone story, Elias goes from self, to community to saving the world and….

    …after all, it is fantasy…but aren’t we all trying to save the world in our own way?

    This story best described by this quote by  Joseph Campbell.

    “We must be willing to let go of the life we have planned, so as to accept the life that is waiting for us.”

    Here’s Chapter 1 of The Rings: Journey Beneath Sirok, Book II of the fantasy trilogy, The Elias Chronicles. Enjoy!

    “…Elias is a character we can all connect with, as he has a good soul and always strives to do right… things like choosing kindness and good over evil…the storyline is a bit unpredictable, which is a welcome relief from a lot of fantasy writing out there right now…I would recommend this book to people who like fantasy stories with lots of fun characters and cool settings…”  

    ThisKidReviewsBooks.com

    1

    From the Crevasses

    The moment had changed time and space forever. The serpent no longer slithered inside, but for now, Elias knew how it had lived and died. 

                Alone, he stood atop the mountain of Sirok. His crusade had been long, but it was now over. As he stood tall, he savored his sweet victory for only a moment as it was time to return to what was familiar. It was time to move on, but he knew his experience with the serpent was now a part of him forever. 

                With only the sounds of a breeze that kicked up the sand where he stood, he looked at the dark and infinite early morning sky. Ribbons of faint light picked up the colors of the Earth and began to fan out. It was like a magnificent painting. The shades of night tinted the light of the morning and then pulled apart so that the darkness faded softly out of sight. 

    He bowed his head and slipped the amulet back around his neck. He knew all too well what it meant when he felt it against his chest. Smiling, he had thought of the exact time he had realized its worth—when it had saved him. 

    Elias scanned the area and let out a sigh. He saw the dragon’s sword on the ground, partly covered by debris, and

    then he grabbed its grip. He looked it over. Suddenly, the wind whipped up, and it forced him to look away. That’s when he saw his sword. Unlike the other blade, his sword stood upright and pierced the Earth. He gripped the hilt and pulled it from the ground. He held it high and looked at the long metal and thought about the force it commanded. These twin swords that once had unleashed an incredible power were nothing more than two cold steel blades. He sealed them away in the compartment at the base of the arch just as his grandmother had instructed him when he prepared for his journey.

                With the toe of his boot, he poked at the dying embers of the campfire. He scooped up the sandy soil of Sirok, covered the coals, and stomped out the edges of the fire. Still feeling the surge of confidence that came with his victory, he felt grateful the fight was over. Elias knew it was time to go home.    

    As he sucked in a heavy breath, he began to descend the crooked path on the rough terrain to journey home. His faithful dog, Cimbora, was at his side just as he had been during his adventure. Elias no longer feared the Sarkany, the evil dragon, as his fears he would find now lay elsewhere. He hoped never to return to this mountain. Elias’ head was full of thoughts of his family. He had left them many weeks ago when he felt he had no choice. His Papa had made it clear to him that there was no place for artists on a farm. Elias’ grandmother, Nattymama, had prepared him to search for the sorcerer, Zoltan, to help him uncover a peace that he would find only in his heart.    

    No sooner had Elias turned and walked away; than the ground trembled. Elias stopped. He looked back, and he saw nothing, but still, he paused. Something was there. He just knew it. He looked around but saw nothing unusual. He turned and continued his descent on his path toward the village. Cimbora, however, stood frozen about fifteen steps behind Elias. He stared at the smoldering campfire. He jerked his head, and then he trotted to catch up with Elias. He stopped once or twice and turned to look behind him. Cimbora sniffed the air. Before long, they were far enough down the mountain and could no longer see the camp.

                The crevasses in the ancient stones that surrounded the campfire tore open and made each gash deeper and longer. A cold wind whipped from them and swept over the dying embers. Too cold to be of this Earth, more wind streamed out from the rock fissures at the top of Sirok, where Elias had been just moments before. The wind spun itself, caught dirt and grit, and pulled in the cinders from the almost-dead fire. 

                The wind now lofted gently around the warm coals as the charm was now in play. Once again, the embers sparked into a flame. The flame hesitated briefly, but it flickered in reds and

    blues as the wind all but diminished. 

                The flame became a fire, and the fire became an inferno.

    ♦ ♦ ♦

    I hope you want to read more…

    You may enjoy these posts: Be True to Yourself: The Amulet: Journey to Sirok, “A Hero Ventures Forth…” Life May Be Imitating Art, Why Fantasy is a Good Read

    About E.G. Kardos

    I am a fiction writer and the author of five books. My writing draws inspiration from the beauty surrounding us all—both in nature and in each other. Spirituality, friendship, love, and our connection to the universe inspire me to write.  Here’s more about me and my books.

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  • Be True to Yourself: The Amulet: Journey to Sirok

    E.G. Kardos

    Be true to yourself. It is only when we follow our hearts that we may truly know who we are and how we should live our lives. As Socrates said, “know thyself”. It’s not so much about having a dream as we all have them. But those dreams may be misguided.

    But by listening to our hearts, it can make all the difference.

    The Amulet: Journey to Sirok is Book I of the trilogy, The Elias Chronicles. I wrote this with young AND older readers in mind. Rich in symbolism and life themes that resonate with all ages, I wanted to share a story about the heart. When I received the following testimonial, I was deeply touched as this is what I set out to do.

    ABOUT The Elias Chronicles:

    In the spirit of C.S. Lewis, the fantasy is never about the fantastical; it’s about deeply human and moral concerns: identity, voice, virtue, family, and conflict. A joyous, satisfying, life-affirming read!”

    Dr. William R. Muth, Editorial Advisory Board: Journal of Adolescent and Adult Literacy

    Below, I am sharing the first seven pages of The Amulet: Journey to Sirok. I hope you enjoy it and join Elias on the rest of his journey. You will find it is YOUR journey too!

    PROLOGUE

    Legend of Sirok

    When the serpent is slithering inside, you will know it, but only with the gift you will understand how it lives and how it dies.” That’s where she always began.  

    Like many women before her, Nattymama passed the legend down to  all who would listen. There were those, of course, who would hear but  would not heed her words. Good fortune, however, came to most who  listened. 

    On the spring equinox at the precise time that winter turned to  spring, Nattymama dusted off a tattered, yellowed scroll and read aloud  to the children in the center of the village. Her account began where the  castle now lay in ruins just to the north of the village on a small rocky  mountain.  

    She told her tale as if it happened only yesterday—or for that matter,  she told it as if it might just happen again. 

    Her story was known to many as The Legend of Sirok. 

    As a young boy, Elias sat front and center and listened to Nattymama,  his grandmother, who brought to life the events that she traced back a  thousand years. He hung on to her every word and getting through the  scary passages took all the courage he could muster. Keeping one eye closed  during some scenes, he patiently waited for his favorite parts. He couldn’t  get enough of the battle that played out in his head or the amazing way  the story ended. For many years to come, he would hear her voice in his  head telling the story just as if he was listening to her for the first time.  Oftentimes he thought of what the legend truly meant. He had all but  committed the ending to memory. 

    “…centuries ago, a lightning bolt hurtled upward from the center of the  Castle of Sirok. The beam split the clear sky. It was then that the thunder  rumbled like a stampede of a thousand water buffalos as bloated clouds,  the color of dried ox blood, gobbled up the open sky. All was dark— 

    motionless. One moment passed and then another, but on the third tick  of a clock, sheets of rain began to pelt the kingdom. This storm was like  no other as something mystical must have been in each and every drop.  

    “Hours passed and  the  rain subsided. Within moments it was certain  that the downpour had washed away what contaminated the gilded  kingdom. Not long after the rainstorm, curls of black smoke billowed  from somewhere near the core of Sirok where huge flames casted an eerie  glow on the naked kingdom.  

    “Still masked by smoke, the sun  eventually  shone through misshapen  holes in the black blanket of clouds above. With little warning, what  was left of the suffocating smoke all but vanished allowing more threads  of light to reveal the stone structures high on the mountaintop. Without  so much as a smoldering ember, Sirok was reborn. Unlike its old, garish  facade, it now stood in simplicity and beauty. 

    “A bird sang followed by another. The water was clean, and the air was  fresh. The buildings were bright, and the roads led freely in and out. The  people saw each other in a new way. The people smiled.

    “Filled with joy, the warrior mounted a horse and rode down the rocky  path that few dared to travel. At the foot of the mountain, a hundred or  so villagers looked on with blank stares. They said little as they witnessed  such chaos that only minutes earlier turned the kingdom into something  new—something altogether different from what had stood before. 

    “Galloping down the rocky path, the villagers focused on the mysterious  young man. The only sounds one could hear were the pounding of the  hooves drubbing on the rocky soil. Thump, thump, thump! The warrior,  who they discovered was a mere boy, raced up to where the villagers  gathered. He yanked on the reins much to the displeasure of his faithful  steed and spoke to the crowd. 

    ‘“What the evil one seized, the people of the kingdom have reclaimed.  With this newfound will, we are now free and have washed our hands of  our needless guilt. We have nothing to fear as we now know who we are.’”

    Nattymama continued, “The villagers standing before the warrior were  a field of statues who said nothing, much to the young warrior’s surprise.  He spoke again. 

    “‘Don’t you see? Our misguided ways in Sirok had become a way of life.  We believed in the wrong things. We lived behind a veil, but it is a new  day for us—and you— as we are the victors.’ 

    “‘So where is he? The evil one?’ a man shouted from the crowd. 

    “‘He is victim of his own undoing and sealed his fate in the eternal fire  of his own making,’ said the warrior. ‘Our resolve is golden. We are the  victors,’ said the boy warrior. 

    “‘An old woman shouted. ‘But what on earth will become of those poor  souls who lived in the Kingdom of Sirok?’ 

    ‘“Oh, dear woman, you do not understand me. They are free. Free! Their  very spirit will make them whole. Sirok will never be the same again; all  those who come to know Sirok, to really know it, will be forever changed.  Sirok is at our very core.’

    “The warrior looked down to his finger that bore a ring that sparkled in  the morning light. He thought of the boy who gave up one treasure for  another and he lifted his chin with confidence and raised his open palm  to the crowd. 

    “He gazed out to the souls who stood in silence and abruptly tugged on  the reins. The stallion reared back on its hind legs and then galloped at top  speed up the rocky mountain.”

    Chapter 1

    Elias

    Like a breeze sifts through the morning mist, his brush strokes barely  touched the canvas. The bristles of his well-worn brush were thin as  many had been lost on previous paintings. This made no difference as his  paintbrush was an extension of his fingers. With his right hand, he dabbed  a speck of magenta and with his left, reddish-brown. 

    With a wisp of a stroke his imagination erupted as he envisioned a  coiled snake on the other side of a fallen tree. Not far away from the rotting  trunk, he created another tale of gypsies who plodded down the narrow  trails below the hill. He was bringing meaning to a deep forest as it was  taking shape on the scuffed-up canvas. His images were fresh as he blended  what he saw in front of him with what he could see in his mind’s eye. It all  lived in that moment and began a life of its own on the flat surface.  

    Elias tilted his head from side to side and inhaled the pure mountain  air as he measured his progress. Looking away at the rolling Mátra  Mountain range, he could smell and taste a mix of deciduous beech and birch trees that sat on a draft coming from the east. One day I’ll catch this  scent in a painting…yeah, I need to figure that out, he thought. 

    When he had arrived a few hours earlier, the sky was a deep blue with  only the faintest veil of clouds on the horizon that played with the smooth  and rolling mountain crests. The heavens were now a smear of amber as the  spectrum of colors gradually cloaked the sky. This moment was altogether  different as he noticed the new colors sharpen above.  

    Perched high upon a cliff, he was alone as he swapped a blank canvas  for what was becoming a kaleidoscope of the Hungarian landscape. This  was his haven. He entwined himself with the beauty and love of nature.  This was nothing new. From a young age, Elias knew what stirred his heart. 

    He made his own canvases by stretching remnants of an abandoned  gypsy tent over a frame he made from a discarded wooden crate.  Nattymama, who was an herbalist, mixed and blended his paints using her  own recipe. His brushes were horsehair affixed to slender but sturdy sprigs  from a nearby cypress tree. Elias used old forgotten wooden dowels and  hinges he found and made them into a sturdy easel. This was all he needed. 

    Elias’ long brown hair grazed his shoulders. His light brown eyes  were striking and ominous to some but opened a gateway to a peace from  deep within him. Lean and average height, he could be pensive and appear brooding at times. Although he was private and a little shy, Elias seldom  kept his thoughts to himself if others pushed, teased, or tested him in any  manner. Like his paintings, he was an original. He was an old soul who  was true to his feelings. He, became frustrated from time to time because  others didn’t take their time to even try to understand him. 

    Pausing for a moment, he surveyed the vast and beautiful terrain, and  he wondered what he could find if he went deep inside the forest well  beyond the trees and rocks that were in plain view. He loved what he  painted and allowed his imagination to fill in the blanks, but he wanted to  know and experience more.  

    The forest looked dark, dense, and cold, but that was just an assumption  or a guess—he wanted to know for sure. He had never traveled the paths  within. Papa cautioned him about the dangers, telling him he could enter at his own risk, but it would be far better to leave the forest alone as there  was much to do right around home. 

    At ease with his own thoughts and feelings, Elias was happy and  fulfilled, but he had a darker side too. An inner voice gnawed at him,  reminding him that he was different from the others in his family and  those in and around the village. What he felt, he shared with only a few, so  he expressed himself in his artwork. As he pieced together in his mind who  he thought he was and wanted to be, it was clear what caused the special  beat in his heart and what created personal joy deep within him. 

    ♦ ♦ ♦

    Elias’s home and family farm were close to where he liked to paint.  They lived about three kilometers from a small village. With four large  rooms and a loft, Papa built their house of white stucco and a thatched  roof. Various supporting buildings, including a small barn and a few sheds,  completed their home.  

    Inside their house, the walls were pure white. Large exposed and rough  beams separated the living area from the loft, where the children slept.  The furnishings were colorful, like his palette, as were the meticulously  crafted quilts and wall hangings Mama and other women in the family  had embroidered. They delicately stitched them with intricate detail over  many generations. One of Elias’ paintings hung over the hearth at Mama’s  insistence. It was a warm yet functional home. 

    They grew wheat. Livestock on the farm included a cow, a few oxen,  some sheep, chickens, and a rooster. Mama and Papa were raising three  boys and two girls, and Elias was the second oldest boy at fifteen. 

    Wiping her pale face with floury fingers, Mama stood on tiptoes to  reach a bowl from a cupboard. Grabbing the bowl with one hand and  tucking it… 

    I hope you want to read more. The trilogy awaits!

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    I am a fiction writer and the author of five books. My writing draws inspiration from the beauty surrounding us all—both in nature and in each other. Spirituality, friendship, love, and our connection to the universe inspire me to write.  Here’s more about me and my books.

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  • Self Discovery Books – an Excerpt from Cutting of Harp Strings

    E.G. Kardos

    We’ve all met new people and wondered what might happen next. Will we become friends, or will we remain acquaintances? We may not think about it at the moment, but we have all meet people who will mean nothing to us, or worse, they may become our enemy; that’s life. Like in “real life” self-discovery books explore much more than the character’s relationship with “self” but their relationship with others and society.

    I love the chapter I’m sharing below. It’s when Eli meets Aiden. Even when I re-read it, I pick up something new.

    Like the characters we meet and journey with them, many times we just don’t have any idea where a relationship is going until it organically unfolds. There have been times that I wished I could check my proverbial crystal ball. Sometimes I have thought “why now” or “why this person”?

    We carry baggage to every introduction of every new person we meet and so do they. In good fiction, so do the characters we come to love.

    Fate?

    Is it fate? I mean who we meet and who we don’t? If we showed up early, late, or not at all what may have we missed out on without even knowing it?

    If you’re like me you’ve asked more than once, “what if?”. Do people enter our lives for a reason? Is all this fate?

    If you enjoy books that explore the complexities of relationships and the journey of self-discovery, Cutting of Harp Strings should be your next read. Well, at least I hope you to read the excerpt I included below.

    First, a little about the story…

    Eli’s life is in limbo. He’s searching for a sense of peace but can’t seem to find it. That all changes when he returns many years later to the place where he first met Aiden. 

    Back those many years ago, Eli and Aiden were polar opposites, but despite their differences, a rare friendship blossoms. A friendship that neither had ever experienced before—or since. Caught off guard, their relationship deepens but like a gut punch, a promise that Aiden made to himself changes everything. Eli is left to pick up the pieces. 

    In Cutting of Harp Strings Eli artfully weaves together a narrative of friendship, living in the moment, and love. 

    Self-Discovery Books

    It’s a story of self-discovery and will take you on an emotional rollercoaster of joy, heartbreak, and ultimately, utter bliss that, I think, is sure to stay with you long after turning the last page. 

    Why?

    Readers have told me that the story is full of engaging characters and has an evocative and visual plot. They have shared with me that Cutting of Harp Strings is an unforgettable coming-of-age self discovery book that leaves them reflecting on the beauty of true friendship and the power of love. 

    I’m happy with that…so please read….and let me know what you think.

    TWO

    August 1973

    I knocked on the door, but no one answered. I was sure that Father Meinrad told me this room number. Double-checking, I pulled out of my pocket a small crumpled-up piece of paper where I had written the room number.

    “Yep,” I said, aloud.

     Turning the knob, I didn’t know what to expect or whom I would find. With hesitation, I wrapped my head around the unwieldy oak door to take a look. No one was there. Creeping in, I dropped my duffel bag and knapsack on the bare tile floor and took a deep breath. Thinking I was intruding, I just then considered going down to the TV room to wait a while but, with a rare moment of certainty, I thought otherwise. After all, this was my room too.

    In both oversized windows were two enormous box fans buzzing and gusting winds in different directions. I turned them down one notch and began looking around but disturbing nothing. I began to size up this guy, after all, I would be living with him in this space for the next two school terms. Tacked up on the wall behind his dresser were pictures from magazines of sports stars. I saw Jerry West and Wilt Chamberlain among the collage. Tucked partly behind his mirror was a recent news clipping of Mark Spitz highlighting his seventh Olympic gold medal. Fluttering to one side was an obscure obituary of someone named Sir Francis Chichester who at sixty-five, I found by scanning the clipping, sailed around the world alone in his ketch called Gipsy Moth IV. 

    “Hmmm. How odd,” I mumbled to myself.

    I didn’t want to disturb anything, but I wanted to know everything. On his stereo was a new album. “Aerosmith—Dream On…he can’t be too bad—maybe.” 

    Mountains of books were everywhere except the bookcase in this twelve-by-something room. Zen, art history, and architectural design,

    you name it, he had books for all his interests. Unusual bookmarks poked out from the pages. Spoons, Popsicle sticks, and a sock accounted for a few. A tee-shirt, gym shorts, and an assortment of tennis shoes were scattered and strewn about. His knotted school necktie hung from a lamp, and his blue blazer and khaki pants draped from an ancient gray radiator under the windows—I could only wonder what he kept in his closet.

    At first glance, the cell, as the monks called them, was a whirlwind of chaotic prep school life, but I sensed there was a kind of order to things. It was an order that, perhaps, only the caretaker might know the code. I wasn’t going to lose sleep over it. Maybe I would care some other day. 

    On a stack of books on his desk, was his journal. Peeking behind me at the door and then back at the notebook, I laid my hand on its cover. Flipping it open, a sinking feeling came over me and closed it with a slap. Peering back at the door, I shook my head letting out a puff of air. Beginning to act a bit like a voyeur made me feel strange and didn’t like the feeling. Even so, I was intrigued with him and speculated if we would get along. If what he collects, and what he reads, and how he keeps his space was any indication, it would seem this year would be dreadfully long. 

    Among the mayhem, much to my surprise, he had both beds impeccably made, so I had no clues as to which bunk was his. Feeling like a stranger heightened my anxiety. Wasn’t so sure I wanted to deal with a new way of living, considering I would be spending this year working my ass off to get into Georgetown next fall. Maybe weird, but not knowing where I would lay my head tonight was bothersome. Sleeping was important. With confidence, I chose one and sat down. I slowly leaned back on my elbows just thinking about this hiccup in my life.

    BAM!

    Without warning, the door flew open nearly blowing off the hinges. I sprang forward. My uneasiness escalated and my heart raced faster than Spitz’s Olympic record times. Like the hinges on the door, I sensed things were not going to be secure the way I was used to, like it or not. I didn’t know why, but my gut told me that I had better take my steps cautiously.

    He was dripping with sweat and wearing cutoff jeans and black Chuck Taylor sneakers. Without uttering a word, but with a glance, he shot past me to one of the fans to cool himself.  As they were before, he cranked up both fans to their highest setting. With his side and back toward me and with his hands on his hips, I had to notice his chiseled definition. Through the skewed windowpane and the flickering fan blades, strange patterns made by the sun played on his torso. He didn’t seem real. He was about my height of six feet, and that was where the similarities ended. His brown hair was thick with a luster and accents of the summer sun. Seemingly molded with a sculptor’s plan, he had a natural outline of long lashes that framed his blue eyes. I later learned the girls at our sister school loved his eyes and thought he was so adorable. His jaw and cheekbones rolled together in absolute harmony. If there was ever a classic nose, it was his. He, of course, had an even tan. As we all have flaws, his were not visible—that’s enough to piss off anyone. 

    Rolling his head in fluid rotation, his actions shifted from his self-focus to that of me. As he guided his neck from side to side, he said something that I could not make out. 

    “What did you say? The fans are too loud, I – didn’t – hear – you,” I said drawing out each word and cupping my ear with my hand. 

    In a single motion, he switched off one fan and turned toward me. Poking fun, he said, “My – name – is – Aiden. You’re late. The semester started ten days ago. I thought the place was all mine until Father Meinrad stopped me five minutes ago. What a bombshell.” He shook his head.

    His choice of words aggravated me, and I responded the way I felt. “Oh, yeah, I’m Eli, and sorry if I’m spoiling your little plans, but are you always an ass?”

    “Geez, hold on. Get a grip. I didn’t mean anything by it. I figured it was just too good to be true—that’s all. If you want to know the truth, I was hoping they’d move someone in here.” He totally switched gears and looked at me with a smile. “I’m sorry. Really, I am. Let’s start over—hey roomie. I’m Aiden.”

    I couldn’t change my mood that fast and muttered with disinterest something like. “Yeah, yeah—hi I’m Eli, whatever.”

    “Okay, that’s a lot better wouldn’t you say?” Aiden asked.

    “Yeah, I’m all for fresh starts anyway. I’m here, aren’t I? So, if I may ask, what happened to your last roommate?” I asked with raised eyebrows.

    “Absolutely, you may ask. Go ahead and ask,” he said crossing his arms.

    “All right already,” I let out a sigh.

    “Okay, okay, just trying to add some levity.”

    “Uh-huh,” I said rolling my eyes.

    “So, anyway, my last roommate was this guy named Brody. He’s still around. He flunked a few classes, and the monks didn’t like that. He went ballistic, but that didn’t have anything to do with his grades because he hates me anyway. He’s got issues and he made me the reason.”

    “Oh really—issues?”

    “Yeah—issues.  I’m over all that and don’t care one way or another,” he said with a flicker of a smile. “Hey, I hope you get good grades—and don’t have issues. I don’t want you, the monks, or your mom or dad coming after me.” 

    Aiden began to tidy the room and nonchalantly said, “Looks like I did take over the place, but I just didn’t figure on a new kid coming in…anyway, what’s mine is yours. Yep, I know how hard it is to be thrown into strange situations.”

    “Don’t worry about it. So, tell me more about Brody.”

    “Huh? Nothing more to tell.” He stiffened up and looked away, so I knew he wasn’t going to budge. He changed the subject. “So, Eli, what’s your story? I mean, why are you just getting here now?”

    “My mom, well, my mom passed away a few years back…”

    “Oh man—didn’t have any idea. Sorry for the crack about irate moms and dads.”

    “Don’t worry about it. Anyway, Dad had this thought that to better prepare me for college, I needed to spend my senior year away from home. Literally a week ago we, I mean he, settled on St. Augustine’s. In the last year, he’s hardly been at home, so I think that’s the real reason. 

    “Cool. It’s all good. You’re here now.”

    “Dad says I should be away from distractions. He presumes coming here would help me, you know, with the Fathers watching out for me. He says it would give me an edge getting into college. Yep, he thinks this is my ticket to Georgetown.”

    “Well, it sounds like he’s got it all figured out,” Aiden said.

    “Yeah, well, you don’t know my whole situation.”

    “Oh?”

    “They appointed him ambassador to Belgium, and he is going to spend a lot of time out of the country. When he is here, he’s going to be pretty busy—even busier than before. He decided that it would be best if I went to a school like this one. I always wanted to be a lawyer—like him. So, if this place helps me to get into Georgetown, then this is a good place for me to be.”

    “Yeah, a boarding school,” Aiden interrupted. “But old Father Meinrad may have put you in the wrong room. I mean, I’m a distraction and I know it. I look for distractions. Like, distraction is my middle name. To me, that’s a good thing. Anyway—you’re here now.”

    There was a long and awkward silence. I ran my fingers through my hair and felt myself tense up starting with my toes shooting upward. 

    “Well, I’m not planning to be around much on the weekends. We’re

    only a couple of hours from D.C. so I plan to go home on the weekends when Dad’s there.”

    “Hmmm. I think you’ll be here most weekends…anyway,” Aiden said. “There are some cool things to do around here. Lots to explore…and the Shenandoah River is pretty excellent this time of year. That’s where I just came from.” 

    “No—no. Thanks, but I’m not here for that. I’m here to get my diploma and move on.”

    “Yeah, yeah yeah—I hear ya. You’re not some kind of a dork, are you? If we’re going to live together, we may as well try to hang out and have a good time. There will be plenty of time for studying. Didn’t mean to scare you with all that distraction talk.”

    I was getting aggravated, and a sigh seeped out. “Hey Aiden, I just don’t need all this right now. Okay?”

    “Yeah, man. I hear you. I gave you your first distraction,” Aiden said sarcastically. “You should know, Eli, the Robes might not say it, but they want us to have some distractions. Saturdays are made for distractions. That’s the way they want it. That’s the way we want it too. We don’t see them, and they don’t see us. Today is Saturday and I’m making the most out of it.” 

    Aiden was more interested in thinking of other things and offered his own perspective. “You may never want to go home on the weekends—or ever.”

    “Oh really?”

    “Let me tell you…Saturdays…it’s our day. Everyone needs a day off. Even the Robes.” 

    “You keep saying Robes, what’s a Robe?”

    “They’re a who not a what. They’re the good Fathers, you know, the monks—the guys wearing black robes who run this place.” 

    “Yeah, yeah, I got it. But you don’t call them that to their face, do you? I mean you say, Father, right?” 

    “Eli, yes call them Father—for a smart dude, you may be a bit slow on the uptake. The kids here have called them Robes forever, you know, behind their backs. Sometimes they overhear us, and they really

    hate it. So, watch out when you use the word because some of them have a fierce backhand slap.”

    “Oh, okay. Thanks for the tip,” I said facing my palms out his way and shaking my head.

     “Anyway, what I was trying to say was that the coaches, who are not Robes, rotate to keep track of us on the weekends. It’s like one coach per class and we have seventy or so in each class so it’s loose, very loose. I spend time running in the woods. It’s much better than on the track or on campus somewhere. It’s just better.”

    I didn’t think he would ever shut up. When he did, I wasn’t sure what to do, but at least now, I knew the slang for priests. Yep, I didn’t think this arrangement was going to work out. 

     “Well, that sounds great and all, but I think I’ll pass. I’ve never been much for hiking or exploring, so count me out.” 

    “Once I get you off-campus, you’ll see.”

    “No, I don’t think so. Don’t think it’s going to happen. Being close to the dorm is fine by me, and anyway I think I’ll be spending time in the library getting ready for college.”

    “Sounds like your dad, I mean you have a plan, but I don’t know… the Robes won’t just let you study all the time. I’m telling you.”

    Aiden seemed to have an answer for everything, so I thought I should change the subject. “Well, I’m going to try out for the basketball team.”

    “Cool. All right. We do have something in common. Yeah, b-ball—cool.”

    Somehow, we managed a moment of quiet. Thank God. Aiden leaped backward onto a bed. He landed squarely in the middle of the mattress while clasping his hands behind his head. Finally, I got my answer and now knew which bed was mine. So, I began to collect my

    duffel and knapsack, threw them on my bed, and unzipped all the compartments. Out of the corner of my right eye, I could tell he was interested in what I was doing. Using my body to shield my belongings, not that I had anything to hide, I unpacked. Just wasn’t ready to offer the same courtesy Aiden had extended to me earlier. 

    Seeing all I needed to see, I decided that this arrangement was awful and was ready to talk to Father Meinrad. He told me earlier in the day that if I didn’t think my roommate would work out, switching rooms was not a problem. He said that several students were without a roommate. A guy named Luis, I remembered him telling me, who lived right down the hall didn’t have one. Yep, Father and I needed to talk.

    After a few minutes of uneasy silence, Aiden lost interest in what I was doing and blurted out, “Okay, didn’t mean any harm. Sorry to intrude.” 

    He bolted up from his bed, yanked off his worn sneakers, and peeled off his shorts. He grabbed a towel hanging from a closet doorknob, sniffed it, and he left the same way he entered. He headed down the long hall to the bathroom for a shower. Just in time, as I was ready to punch someone.

    …this is the end of Chapter TWO. Enjoy Cutting of Harp Strings from the beginning.

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  • Eddie Zen: a Zen Master Next Door

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    E.G. Kardos

    Without seeking it, profound spiritual growth can arise in the most unexpected places—from a child’s reaction, a stranger who enters our lives, or even our neighbor; thus, the Zen master next door.

    Zen stories and philosophies transcend all spiritual belief systems. Our belief systems are quite similar; however, some individuals don’t always recognize this. I’m not sure why. However, because of these similarities, connections, and integration of philosophies we share, I decided to write about them. I wrote short stories called parables for enlightened everyday living. Each story focusing on seventeen significant philosophies that capture Zen in our everyday lives and are present in most belief systems. You may see yourself or someone you know in these parables. I hope so.

    During the publishing process, Daniel Pink, author of A Whole New World and many other books, said:

    “What an inspiring way to learn about our very soul, The modern parables in Zen Master Next Door are captivating and left me wanting more.”

    I can’t review my own book so I will leave that up to others, but I certainly enjoyed writing it. Here’s one Zen story from Zen Master Next Door (3rd and latest edition).

    Enjoy!

    EDDIE ZEN

    The energy of the mind is the essence of life.

    Aristotle

    Listen to the voice of nature, for it holds treasures for you.

    Huron—Native American

    When knowledge becomes tattered, wisdom springs.

    Eddie Zen

                Start with the truth.  At least that is what he told Judd, his neighbor of nearly a decade.

                “Answers to questions most important to humanity always lie within us.  Come on, certainly you’ve heard that before,” Eddie said with a frothy tone.  He started conversations this way, bypassing any normal greeting.

                On a warm breeze that filtered through the trees in Eddie’s front yard, arrived the rich fragrance of juniper from Judd’s garden next door.  Eddie’s yard, now speckled with boxes, chairs, tables and bookcases, was once a pristine postage stamp-sized lot but now resembled a yard sale without the swarms of bargain hunters. 

                Judd dropped by on a lark, not knowing that his elderly neighbor was moving that very day.  But that was common practice for both men.  Judd was unaware of much around him, while Eddie was unpredictable at best. 

                Replying to the older man, Judd nodded his head.  “What’s going on here?  Where are you going?”

                “I’m moving on…just moving on.  But don’t worry about that, because I’m trying to give you something to think about.  Think about it, the answers you search for come from wisdom that’s passed down through the ages.  I repeat, in case you aren’t catching on, it’s about wisdom—w-i-s-d-o-m.” 

                Giving in as he usually did, Judd said, “All right already— so where does it come from?  This wisdom.” 

                “Good question,” Eddie said, drawing in a slow breath while scratching his day old stubble.  “It started with our first ancestors and flowed

    on year after year, decade after decade and century after…well you get my point,” he said squinting as he looked to the gray, hazy sky, thick with summer’s humidity.  “Anyway, although this wisdom has been fermented like a good chardonnay many times over for many years, it is now tucked away.  Seldom does modern man give it much weight.” 

                Eddie sat down on a dusty, wooded trunk and yanked off his horn-rimmed glasses.  He held them up, and he peered through the lenses, and put them back on.  Taking a long, deliberate breath, he continued.  “Today we rely more on science at one end of the spectrum or blind faith at the other.  Wisdom is overlooked and seldom part of our decision-making.  Don’t you think?”  Judd obliged nodding his head.

                As the movers in the house packed Eddie’s belongings, it dawned on Judd that he was always drawn to Eddie’s musings and now seeing him leave the neighborhood, an instant sense of emptiness plopped in his abdomen.  With downcast eyes, Judd told him that he wished he had taken the time to get to know him—really know him. 

                Eddie was a rather imposing but gentle man.  Standing a hair over six feet tall, he was slender and looked like a man ten years his junior.  He always donned frayed oxford shirts that draped on his torso like bed linens on a grandmother’s clothesline.  His silver hair was thick for a man of any age, impeccably combed and parted to the side with the straightest of parts. 

                With an easy smile and radiant disposition, Eddie unwittingly drew Judd to him and always did.  Despite his incessant ramblings, Judd knew Eddie was a singular sort.  A ready smile punctuated Eddie’s discourse.

                “Ah, you know me well enough.  Don’t worry about that.  Get to know yourself!  Get to know others and learn from them.  Get to know the guy next door.  This is what I’m talking about,” he told Judd, springing from his seat and walking to a lopsided pyramid of boxes. 

                He began fumbling through a crumbling, corrugated container.  For a moment, Eddie said nothing.  He looked perplexed as he shuffled papers in the container.  Losing his concentration from moment to moment, he paused as he examined an ancient fountain pen and a softball-sized sphere of rubber bands.

                “Are you looking for something?”  Judd asked.

                “Yes.  Why, what does it look like I’m doing?” he said with a sigh.  “It’s in here somewhere.  I want to give you something I started and I insist you finish it.  What I’m looking for will show you what I mean.”

                Eddie continued to rummage through boxes.  As he did, dust emanated from each box flap, filling the immediate area with a ripe tang. 

                Eddie stopped for a moment, looking up without his signature gleam and paused.  “You’ve always been kind to me and listened as I’ve spouted off at the first moment you’ve gotten home from work.  You have been kind enough to speak with me while you’re out in the yard.  Even at last year’s Fourth of July block party, I pulled you away from the beer cooler to throw you a thought, and you were there with a catcher’s mitt to snare it.  Whatever I threw out there, you were willing to give it the kind of attention I was looking for.”  He smiled and nodded as if proud of a son.

                Judd, always neatly dressed and clean-shaven, was in his late thirties, had a muscular physique and short-cropped blonde curls with steely blue eyes.  His usual look was a golf shirt, khaki shorts and flip-flops. 

                Married to Ashley for nine years, they had two children.  Rarely taking time to think beneath the facade of many issues, Judd spent time taking care of his young family with little time for introspection.  He wasn’t so different from most folks.  Eddie knew this.

                Judd could not imagine what he was hunting for, and as Eddie rifled through dusty boxes, he suddenly felt empty-handed, wanting to reciprocate.  He thought of nothing of worth that he could conjure up to give the old man.  This worried him.  Judd told him that. 

                Preoccupied while looking through his belongings, Eddie gently gestured to him, waving his hands in the air while saying, “You’ve given me plenty.  But, I guess you don’t realize that, now do you?” 

                Before Judd could utter a syllable and from calm to excitement and without warning, Eddie blurted, “Ah, yes.  Eureka!  Here it is!”

                Before rescuing the gift from the box, Eddie peered down at the prize.  There was a glow about his eyes.  He took a breath and pulled it up and out.  As if it was a gold brick, he handed Judd a ream of yellowed paper, tattered and dog-eared at many of the edges.  Tinged with a scent of mildew, what Eddie held, Judd knew, must be significant.  As Eddie flipped through and peered at many of the pages, Judd saw that what he was handing him was a collection of handwritten stories.

                Taken by the gesture, Judd asked, “Why are you giving these to me?  I mean, this looks like a lifetime of work.  You ought to keep it.”  At best, he was bewildered. 

                Eddie put his hands in his pockets and, leaning forward on his toes, explained, “I don’t need them where I’m going.  Besides, my hands can no longer tolerate holding a pen for very long.  Perhaps you can read them and put them to good use in some way.  Maybe it will get you off your duff and get you to write something too.  You know it is in you.  It’s a gift…by the way, they’re parables.” 

                Overheated from his search, Eddie sat in a recliner under a maple tree in his front yard, waiting to be loaded onto the moving van.  He looked up intently at the massive tree boughs, as his thoughts accompanied the expression of resolve on his face.  He motioned to Judd to pull up a kitchen chair from the mountain of boxes on the other side of the slate walkway, and to join him. 

                In the fashion of Socrates dispensing philosophies under an olive tree, Eddie began to expound.  “When we read stories, you know, it is natural for us to pull personal meaning from them.  This in itself is a good thing.  Don’t you think?  Writers like it when this happens.  As I like to think, it may lead to introspection—I like that word.  But at the very least stories help us think.  Are you with me?”

                Judd was a trifle confused.  “So what is it all about?  I mean, you always tell me that the answers are inside of each of us.  I bet that’s all here.  The answers you have found in you?”

                With his long, thin finger pointing to his own chest, Eddie answered.  “Precisely.  I did say that, but it doesn’t mean I know all the answers.  In complexity, there is simplicity.  In simplicity, there is complexity.  Answers are not always the result of equations or any logical order—if so, we would unfetter all the mysteries, be superhumans, and not, well, just humans.  There is nothing perfect about any one of us.  I however, think that stories, not just mine, are like beautiful sunflowers.  They hold beliefs and values that somehow creep and root themselves into most civilizations.  Like a tall sunflower staring us in the face we sometimes still ask—so where’s this flower?”

                The workers were moving his life’s possessions with such disturbing ease.  “This move shouldn’t be this easy and this fast,”Judd thought.  Eddie saluted the movers as they filed by him.  Except for Eddie’s recliner, all of his belongings that once covered his yard were securely in the truck. 

                In spite of the commotion around him, Judd began to think of all the times he and Eddie had talked and he was only now beginning to connect the dots like the excuses Eddie made by walking over to Judd’s house, ringing the doorbell to borrow a dictionary.  “Eddie needs a dictionary?  How come I didn’t think that was odd,” Judd scolded himself.  He thought of the times that Eddie would show up with a beer in hand when Judd cooked burgers on the grill, or wanted to borrow a snow shovel in May.  These were times that Eddie had something to say.  Sometimes Judd listened and other times he was preoccupied.  “I wish I had listened all those times,” Judd thought.

                Eddie continued, “We’re all the same.  The mores and ways of life are probed and pondered today just as they were by those who resided at Stonehenge or by the ancient Greeks, or the Bushmen of Africa or the contemporaries of Confucius, or the greeter at Wal-Mart or the neighbor over the fence, or me or you.  Did I leave out anyone?  These truths are worthy of another look, don’t you think?  Perhaps two or three more looks.  That’s all I’m saying.”

                As Judd looked away for a moment and turned back to answer, Eddie seemed to have vanished.  Scanning the yard, Judd noticed that Eddie was slowly climbing the front steps of his home to determine the progress of the workers.  Judd stayed, enjoying the warmth of Eddie’s lingering presence.  Although it was getting close to noon and hotter than ever, he was content as he imagined what the old man was all about.  He began flipping through the ragged paper and found himself easing back into the recliner.  He thumbed through the musty pages, reading snippets of different stories and passages.  He found himself mesmerized. 

                Judd, put the bundle of papers on his lap, took a breath, got up, and began to search for Eddie.  More questions swirled in his head. 

                Eddie walked to the rear of the house, orchestrating the movers.  Judd caught up with him and followed.

                After a moment, Eddie pulled himself away from the mundane and in awkward silence, walked to the main staircase six feet from his opened front door.  He sat down on the eighth step.  He crossed his legs at his bony ankles and placed his graceful hands to the back of his head.  Sunbeams shot through the door.  He watched the workers as they swiftly moved in and out of his house.

                Eddie’s home was empty.  He stood and then moved with a lightened gait, as if a burden melted away.  He walked outside and down the brick stoop one last time. 

                Judd picked up his pace to join him in the front of the house.  The movers were busy repositioning the recliner in the recesses of the truck.  It was done.  With a yank of a canvas strap, the back door of the truck slammed shut.  Just like that, his belongings were stowed away, never to return. 

                Eddie shouted, “Remember to deliver the furniture and boxes that are marked in red and send the rest on to the Salvation Army.”  The men nodded and Eddie waved them on.  He turned back to Judd.

                “My parables, if you can call them that, are an attempt to show that there is meaning in all the ordinary things we do.  Life lessons can be learned wherever we are, whether in a bustling city, on a farm in America’s heartland, or in a suburban neighborhood.  There is much we can learn from the taxi driver, the stock broker, the dairy farmer and the neighborhood hairdresser…oh yeah, I learned a thing or two from her over the years,” he said smugly.  He sighed, placing his hand on Judd’s shoulder.  “In a way, they teach us who we are.  Wisdom is not only right in front of us—it is within us.  The truth that evades us lies within.  It always has.”

                The moment fell silent.  Eddie turned to look at his house one more time.  He faced Judd and with a toothy smile he said, “I’m ready.”

                A moment later, he walked to his car and got in.  Still smiling, he waved to Judd.  Judd reciprocated.

                “I’ll visit,” Judd said.

                “No you won’t.  You don’t know where I’m headed.  Do me one better.”

                “What’s that?”

                “Look inside and add the next chapter.”

                With that, Eddie drove away, not waiting for his neighbor’s response.  Judd’s mind was empty and he said nothing.  In solitude, he was motionless.  But when Eddie was out of sight, his mind was now replete, and silently bade him a farewell with a promise.

                “Goodbye Eddie.  I will.”

    The Kingdom of God is within you.

    Jesus

    Be a lamp to yourself.  Be your own confidence.  Hold to the truth within yourself, as to the only truth.

    The Buddha

    In the attitude of silence the soul finds the path in a clearer light, and what is elusive and deceptive resolves itself into crystal clearness.  Our life is a long and arduous quest after the Truth.

    Gandhi

    Seek not good from without; seek it within yourself, or you will never find it.

    Epictetus—second century

    Ask questions from your heart and you will be answered from the heart.

    Omaha—Native American

    *****

    Sometimes it takes storytelling to convince any spiritual being what he or she should already know.  Truth comes from within. Simple?  Maybe, but truth leads to wisdom, which is the tenuous center amid science and faith.  What is truth?  Who is truth?  We must pause to discern how truth is real and part of our daily lives.  But it is not enough to know oneself.  As truth lies beneath our bones, so it lies beneath our neighbor’s bones as well.  Simple? 

    *****

    Want to read more parables of enlightened everyday living? Here’s the book.

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    About E.G. Kardos

    I am a fiction writer and the author of five books. My writing draws inspiration from the beauty surrounding us all—both in nature and in each other. Spirituality, friendship, love, and our connection to the universe inspire me to write.  Here’s more about me and my books.

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